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I have 220 stories published in 27 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 527119 times and 296 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1381 of my 4,447 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1394 votes

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I am a Brummie living in Northampton who loves to write but gets distracted with other things. I enjoy horror/fantasy and anything that provokes original thought.

My literary heroes are Clive Barker, Stephen King, Edgar Allan Poe and HP Lovecraft. Everyone should read George Orwell's Nineteen Eighty-four .

I have work published by AlienBuddha Press, Loft Books, BlackBough Poems, DarkWinter Literary Magazine and Paragraph Planet.

You can find me on SoundCloud at https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685

on Twitter at https://twitter.com/BeeRummie

Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/beerummie/

at Bluesky @marandina.bsky.social

and at Threads https://www.threads.net/@beerummie

 

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Pointless Boris (Part Two of two)

This is the ninth entry in the satirical series at https://www.abctales.com/collection/pandemic-tales-bojo-and-co Part 1 at: https://www.abctales.com...
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Pointless Boris (Part One of Two)

This is the eighth entry in the satirical series at https://www.abctales.com/collection/pandemic-tales-bojo-and-co Pointless Boris (Part One) Things...
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Life Through a Prism

Audio version at: https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685/life-through-a-prism-mp3 Life Through a Prism Life’s journey viewed through a backlit prism of...
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Into the Woods (Hansel and Gretel)

Into the Woods (Hansel and Gretel) Moonbeams cast striations across velvet night, breezes blow in conspiratorial, hushed murmurs, Timber wolves howl...
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Groundhog Boris

This is the seventh entry in the satirical series at https://www.abctales.com/collection/pandemic-tales-bojo-and-co Groundhog Boris The numbers on...
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1381 of my comments have received 1394 Great Feedback votes

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A concise, poetical

Posted on Fri, 01 Mar 2024

A concise, poetical explanation for leap years. There's something magical about a 29th February isn't there? Nicely done, Rhiannon.

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Posted in Fixing the calendar

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"...is it wisps of mist or

Posted on Thu, 29 Feb 2024

"...is it wisps of mist or smoke rising in the valley below them?
and Madley large satellite-tracking dishes visible."

Another evocative ramble with you, Rhiannon. And what a way to finish. Enjoyed, of course :)

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Posted in Clehonger to Ruckhall Circular

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That's a unique way of

Posted on Mon, 26 Feb 2024

That's a unique way of painting a pen picture of a snake using the image of it being stalked by a cat. Your empathy and admiration of the serpent comes through.

"Friendly, pampered python" never thought I'd see those words in the same...

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Posted in Ophidian at Four O’Clock

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That's a wonderful story and

Posted on Sun, 25 Feb 2024

That's a wonderful story and so well told through your poem, Jenny. A lovely read, for sure.

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Posted in The Fish Hawker

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Nicely done, Luigi. Gripping

Posted on Thu, 22 Feb 2024

Nicely done, Luigi. Gripping and compelling. Keep going!

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Posted in A Devil of a Man (7) - In Vino Veritas

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Such a sad story well told.

Posted on Sat, 24 Feb 2024

Such a sad story well told.

[Small typo: Should be "raindrops"?]

 

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Posted in The moon is all bluish tonight

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It's ironic that Stalin was

Posted on Wed, 21 Feb 2024

It's ironic that Stalin was airbrushed from Russian history and yet, as alluded to here, the ignomy of his deeds is being repeated. Perhaps in time and probably after his death, Plutin will suffer the same fate.

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Posted in Pearly Gates : A Tour of Russia’s Hell by Alfred N.Muggins Part 2

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Not sure I ever had to endure

Posted on Mon, 19 Feb 2024

Not sure I ever had to endure an appraisal by Zoom (thankfully). I imagine they are de rigeur these days. Made me shudder hearing/reading the corporate stuff, though. I imagine you are drawing from first hand experience to get it so accurate/...

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Posted in Parcel for you...Part 19

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Plutin, Putinpot and Putin -

Posted on Sat, 17 Feb 2024

Plutin, Putinpot and Putin - all names for the Russian horned devil. Always good to read another Muggins take on Mother Russia. I am sure that, when the time comes, Saint Peter will turn the despot away and have him duly arrested. The whole...

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Posted in Pearly Gates : A Tour of Russia’s Hell by Alfred N.Muggins Part 1

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Catharsis is a common reason

Posted on Sat, 17 Feb 2024

Catharsis is a common reason for writing. It's what brought me back to creative writing a few years ago. Maybe the gun is a metaphor, maybe it's real. Some pain never goes away and it becomes a question of finding an outlet for it along with...

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Posted in Killing the killers

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