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I have 220 stories published in 27 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 546817 times and 296 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1394 of my 4,468 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1407 votes

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Paul

I am a Brummie living in Northampton who loves to write but gets distracted with other things. I enjoy horror/fantasy and anything that provokes original thought.

My literary heroes are Clive Barker, Stephen King, Edgar Allan Poe and HP Lovecraft. Everyone should read George Orwell's Nineteen Eighty-four .

I have work published by AlienBuddha Press, Loft Books, BlackBough Poems, DarkWinter Literary Magazine and Paragraph Planet.

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1394 of my comments have received 1407 Great Feedback votes

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It was good that the Russian

Posted on Mon, 15 May 2023

It was good that the Russian Fifth Columnists and spies didn't materialise. I hope Mrs Muggins has it in her heart to forgive her son and grandson. It seems a tad harsh to mitigate their respective inheritances. York (the Viking stronghold) is...

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Posted in The Coronation Of Charles III, the ‘Green’ King by Alfred N.Muggins Part 2

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It's a visually, sumptuous

Posted on Sun, 15 Apr 2012

It's a visually, sumptuous opening set of scenes. Will keep reading over the next few days [Should that say "... making bread to line their stomachs.." in para 2?] Paul 

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Hi Jenny. Enjoyed the intro

Posted on Sun, 15 Apr 2012

Hi Jenny. Enjoyed the intro and intrigued to read on. Looking forward to following this over the next few days. Thanks for flagging it on your blog update. Paul :) 

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Posted in Dwellers of the New World Prologue

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"Zadok the Priest’ by Handel

Posted on Fri, 12 May 2023

"Zadok the Priest’ by Handel from George II’s Coronation in 1727". There's something ornately regal about some music isn't there? Yes, it was quite an occasion and fitting that the Muggins's were watching. Henry VIII would have been impressed (...

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Posted in The Coronation Of Charles III, the ‘Green’ King by Alfred N.Muggins Part 1

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"...dark and bright, shadow

Posted on Fri, 12 May 2023

"...dark and bright, shadow and light.."

You paint a brooding backdrop in so few words, Rhiannon. Very apt for this overcast day. Beautiful pics, as well. Nicely done, of course. Paul 

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Posted in Dramatic Sky

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Eesh Jean, the bed shaking

Posted on Fri, 12 May 2023

Eesh Jean, the bed shaking sounds intimidating. Well done you for going through two sessions like that. The whole thing sounds overwhelming. So it sounds like a pause for now so I hope you find rest and peace for a while. I'm sure it will all...

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Posted in Cippy and Bella

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"....this snare drum hail.."

Posted on Tue, 09 May 2023

"....this snare drum hail.."

A journey of introversion and an inner din that's a constant chatter. I can hear it now.

Creative and imaginative. Very nicely done, Jane. 

 

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Posted in Rattle

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"... spotless celestial crew.

Posted on Thu, 11 May 2023

"... spotless celestial crew..."

The first two lines get the poem off to a flyer and it takes off and flies. Great lines, wonderful images. Enjoyed. Paul 

 

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Posted in Thinking Bad of Angels

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Me three. Beautiful Cornwall.

Posted on Tue, 09 May 2023

Me three. Beautiful Cornwall. You have captured a sea shore laden with magic in this poem.

Some great lines like "....reurned ashore by the erosion of wind.."

Gorgeous poem. 

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Posted in At Jangye-Ryn

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"....ships afloat the green

Posted on Mon, 08 May 2023

"....ships afloat the green sea,

harvesting.."

 

Such lovely images conjured, Rhiannon. Just lovely. Paul :) 

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Posted in The Green 'Sea'

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