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I have 222 stories published in 27 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 559057 times and 299 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1397 of my 4,494 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1410 votes

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Paul

I am a Brummie living in Northampton who loves to write but gets distracted with other things. I enjoy horror/fantasy and anything that provokes original thought.

My literary heroes are Clive Barker, Stephen King, Edgar Allan Poe and HP Lovecraft. Everyone should read George Orwell's Nineteen Eighty-four .

I have work published by AlienBuddha Press, Loft Books, BlackBough Poems, DarkWinter Literary Magazine and Paragraph Planet.

You can find me on SoundCloud at https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685

on Twitter at https://twitter.com/BeeRummie

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at Bluesky @marandina.bsky.social

and at Threads https://www.threads.net/@beerummie

 

1397 of my comments have received 1410 Great Feedback votes

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"Rough-coated cucumber-like

Posted on Fri, 21 Apr 2023

"Rough coated cucumber-like weed...."

 

Sounds extraordinary and you bring it to life with your poem, Rhiannon. Fascinating video, as well. Paul :) 

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It's always refreshing to see

Posted on Wed, 19 Apr 2023

It's always refreshing to see Alfred Muggins telling it how it is. He may give Piers Morgan a run for his money at this rate. Indian, Delta, Kent....all old news now. Life goes on.. 

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I love the Holst "Planet

Posted on Wed, 19 Apr 2023

I love the Holst "Planet Suite". Extraordinary classical music. Well I hope you make it across the great divide and through the vibrant vortex of rainbow water divine. Another dreamy reverie from your sketchbook. Always a pleasure drifting with...

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Posted in Space And Time

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A clever, thoughtful poem

Posted on Wed, 19 Apr 2023

A clever, thoughtful poem that made me think. I *still* haven't seen Fritz Lang's movie "Metropolis". I really should. I haven't been to Amsterdam either. I have been "home", though. Which could be just about anywhere if it's thought of as a...

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Posted in Pick A City

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Those first two lines are so

Posted on Thu, 13 Apr 2023

Those first two lines are so powerful and relevant. Yes, mobile phones are the scourge of social interaction. Particularly significant when it comes to bringing up children.. An important poem with an important message, Rhiannon. Paul 

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Posted in Interaction

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".. the slack-skinned

Posted on Wed, 12 Apr 2023

".. the slack-skinned starving, sucking on stones.."

Wonderful alliteration and I just can't read a poem of yours anymore without hearing you reading it in my head. Did I ever tell you that you have a voice for radio, Ewan?! :) 

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"... resembling floating

Posted on Wed, 12 Apr 2023

"... resembling floating confetti at a bride and grooms wedding."

 

Beautiful, colour-laden images of spring

 What's not to like?! Just lovely, of course, Jenny. Paul :) 

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A story that undulates under

Posted on Wed, 12 Apr 2023

A story that undulates under the earth with a stellar cast of worms. I can imagine you reading this at the next ABCtales event, Luigi. Adroitly done, as always. Keep well. Paul 

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Posted in Twists and Turns

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"And if someone can't get any

Posted on Wed, 12 Apr 2023

"And if someone can't get any manna, then I don't want any of it, either." Well, yes.

 

All very nicely done with such imaginative flair. Paul 

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Yep, you have a great rhythm

Posted on Tue, 11 Apr 2023

Yep, you have a great rhythm with your writing and a wonderful imagination. I seem to remember you saying you were going to have a tilt at self-publishing a while ago. Did you ever get around to it? Righteo....off to part 3..

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