monodemo

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I have 442 stories published in 17 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 234138 times and 117 of my stories have been cherry picked.
36 of my 359 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 37 votes

Hi I'm monodemo,

I'm not long into the serious business of writing. I've dabbled for years but now I'm serious about it. I would appreciate any and all feedback because I want to get better.

Thanks.

My stories

Toothache

By monodemo on Wed, 26 Feb 2020

Toothache Pain Wakes me up From sleep Pain Permeating From sleep Reason: Cavity Permeating Pain excruciating Reason: Cavity Extraction necessary Pain...

Poem

Certificate U

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Detective

By monodemo on Tue, 25 Feb 2020

Finally promoted To detective, A job he earned From his perspective, He worked hard On the beat, But found it tough On his feet, Now a desk All to...

Crime

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Certificate 18

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The Jar

By monodemo on Tue, 25 Feb 2020

Josh was a tortured young soul. When he was fifteen he was made an orphan. Both of his parents, his brother and two sisters died in a car crash. Josh...

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What was stolen?

By monodemo on Mon, 24 Feb 2020

‘What was stolen?’ The detective said As she put pressure To her head. ‘What was stolen?’ The detective asked, Her mind went straight To her past. ‘...

Poem

Certificate PG