monodemo
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I have 444 stories published in
18 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 241045 times
and 117 of my stories have been cherry picked.
36 of my 359 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 37 votes
Hi I'm monodemo,
I'm not long into the serious business of writing. I've dabbled for years but now I'm serious about it. I would appreciate any and all feedback because I want to get better.
Thanks.
My stories
Ceviche
My daughter got sea monkeys, when she was three, Into their fortress she poured the powder, I thought ‘how hard could it be?’ Before long it was like...
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- 352 reads
Advice
The worse advice I was ever given Was from a social worker, She was career driven, Of my life an observer. How she convinced Me I wasn’t being abused...
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- 415 reads
The queen is dead
I was in England for my wife's birthday, Down the West End. We brought our lovely daughter, And her best friend. We wandered into a busy pub, Just...
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- 675 reads
The cell
A long narrow room, With bars on the door, It smells like damp, Water on the floor. The exposed brick, The darkened light, I look around, And see in...
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- 553 reads
When will this all end?
I regret the advice the government gave Not to stock up on food and loo roll, All of this hassle I would have saved, When covid 19 came to call. The...
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- 424 reads