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I have 227 stories published in 13 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 339561 times and 195 of my stories have been cherry picked.
338 of my 1,431 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 355 votes

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JoAnne Stefanizzi

 

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"Willow's Tail" 7

Martha stepped out into her herb garden and let the quiet of the day settle around her and since Perfidia had taken Mr. Appleton to his rehab this...
Cherry

"Willow's Tail" 6

The door bell rang as Perfidia was passing the front door, not seeing Martha nearby she shrugged and opened it, and promptly froze. “Mr. Appleton?”...
Cherry

"Willow's Tail" 5

Perfidia finally caught up with her hat and grabbed it away from the dancing wind. She put it back on her head just as that wayward wind suddenly...
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"Willow's Tail" 4

Martha slid a sideways glance at Perfidia as they walked the two blocks to the market. Perfidia was wearing a brilliant yellow sundress and a big...
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"Willow's Tail" 3

Martha placed Willow's breakfast bowl down near her and went back to her seat at the table. Willow kept her eyes on the visitor as she lowered her...

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338 of my comments have received 355 Great Feedback votes

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I've just read your lovely

Posted on Thu, 01 Jul 2021

I've just read your lovely poem and you do have a talent whipping words into vivid expression that takes us on your journey. I stood on the hill and felt the winds that swayed the wheat fields and watched the colors of the day curious too of...

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Posted in Timeless Wonder

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All that was - all that could

Posted on Tue, 29 Jun 2021

All that was - all that could have been - all that sadly is. I loved this poem with its under the earth occupants literally turning in their graves. Can only wish Merlin finds that magic bone and waves off a few of these false kings.- not much...

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Posted in The Once and Futile Kings

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Yes, it is our anniversary

Posted on Thu, 17 Jun 2021

Yes, it is our anniversary today and I've been looking at photographs which of course brought on these musings. Photo’s of wonderful years filled with, no packed with, treasured moments, triggered the reminder of the distance from those moments -...

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Posted in "Photographs & Reflections"

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Intriguing poem Ewan, it

Posted on Thu, 17 Jun 2021

Intriguing poem Ewan, it casts a spell of its own – The reader wonders: Is this a spell cast by true incantation or by the spirit drenched in extraordinary desire, either way it is a potent poem. ...

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Posted in This is a Spell

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Tender and sensitive, fragile

Posted on Wed, 16 Jun 2021

Tender and sensitive, fragile in the knowledge that life can turn instantly to tragedy, or joy. Never knowing which will be given, at any moment. Your story unfolded with happiness then drew us backwards through the unknown terror of a diagnosis...

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Posted in Little Miracles

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Touchingly raw and a tearful

Posted on Wed, 09 Jun 2021

Touchingly raw and a tearful and sad comparison. Caged birds are a painful sight to behold, knowing thier freedom is just an open door away. One should never trap a free spirit or a feathered friend- allow it to soar, even if it gets caught in a...

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Posted in Caged Bird

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The vaulted mind, locked, key

Posted on Sun, 30 May 2021

The vaulted mind, locked, key lost and unable to see another's view is a difficult thing to be confronted with and I am so sorry your aunt and you had to have that experieince, but it was a comfort and support for you to be with her. And maybe...

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Posted in The Pocket Watch

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When you bring these stories

Posted on Mon, 24 May 2021

When you bring these stories to paper they shimmer. There is a similarity in the decades for me, I too was young in the 60's so the games of marble, imagining of cowboy wagons, finger guns and pirate ships from crates, rings true to me. But I...

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Posted in When We Were Young

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Brilliant -I could see this

Posted on Sat, 29 May 2021

Brilliant -I could see this person so clearly and you captured a human moment of misunderstanding and embarrassed communication and captured it so humorously- I loved this one very much, well done!

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Posted in Don't judge a book by its cover!

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Ah first love, the awakening

Posted on Sat, 29 May 2021

Ah first love, the awakening of emotions we never knew we could feel for another. It is heady and the world is vivid with color when we feel it but, as Jenny said, we do go through journeys good and bad to enlighten us, to bring us to discovery...

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Posted in The one that got away

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