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Why didn’t I really like it?
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/A_Girl_with_a_Watering_Can A copy of this was given by an aunt when I was quite young. She was loving and kindly but...
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Come! See! [6. of series based on old carols]
O come, all you faithless … see the wonder in Bethlehem. Baby, King Jesus, born to be our proxy. O come, do not ignore him, O come, bow now before him, receive his gifts, adore him, Christ, the Lord …
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The Focussed Day
Focus on love focus on giving focus on joy focus on feasting focus on family and friends and also those drifting – pity and compassion shelter and...
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Wonderful things come from surprising packages
Rough old oyster, hidden pearl …
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Silent night, Special night [5. of series based on old carols]
[Continuing the hymn-for-Sundays series] … Silently, most knew not sleeping babe, makeshift cot, held the Gift unique for all, now awhile for milk must call. …
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Some interesting thought
Posted on Wed, 30 Sep 2015
Some interesting thought threads here, Terry, and play on the sounds of vale/veil/countervail.
Read full commentIn line 3 is it meant to be 'vail'' or veil' ?
Posted in Vale of Tears
So important, those last two
Posted on Mon, 28 Sep 2015
So important, those last two lines, and the whole poem speaks of imortant things being 'taught' that are probably unnoticed by many, rather than the whisking of children hither and thither for special experiences and 'education'. I think we found...
Read full commentPosted in A Natural Mum
Nice little incident. There
Posted on Mon, 28 Sep 2015
Nice little incident. There are often those occasional little sparks of communiation, memories, and humour that help to realise that the confused person is still there somewhere inside, and help to be able to show love and warmth more...
Read full commentPosted in Journeys
It does seem to have the feel
Posted on Sat, 26 Sep 2015
It does seem to have the feel of the girl who's been so sick and a bit nightmarey with fever, and feeling the oddness of convalescence and everything feeling distorted, and also the feel of a little girl wanting to be a bit removed from...
Read full commentPosted in Slow Burn
Very enjoyable going on the
Posted on Thu, 24 Sep 2015
Very enjoyable going on the walk with you again, and the sense of time and the kind of noticing that goes with the speed, or lack of it, of a walk makes it seem very real. A lovely Pick of the Day too.
Read full commentI've been trying to catch the...
Posted in In July
What a nice way to end, and
Posted on Sat, 19 Sep 2015
What a nice way to end, and even the advice she was able to give him, really just nudging him on the way he had been tending to go of realising how much these people had done for him, and his need of showing his changed attitudes.
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Posted in The Wanderlust Lady and the Door to Door Salesman - 41 The End
From an extremely brief
Posted on Mon, 14 Sep 2015
From an extremely brief offering to a very lengthy one! Certainly not sure I've followed it all (though as usual your rolling, rhythmic rhyming is very effective), but the thoughts that come to mind at the end are that there was a new start after...
Read full commentPosted in Boa's Ark
A dream like mix of memories
Posted on Sat, 12 Sep 2015
A dream like mix of memories and imaginings and hopes to ease the stress? (did you mean 'dreams of memories' rather than 'dreamt of memories' in the last stanza?)
gifting treasures in the form of shells and gleaming gems –- a...
Read full commentPosted in Did You...
Enjoyable scene as Bee says,
Posted on Sat, 12 Sep 2015
Enjoyable scene as Bee says, and a clever use of the IP without making the colours too dominant. Rhiannon
Read full commentPosted in Eveningesque
Oh, the tragedy and agony
Posted on Fri, 11 Sep 2015
Oh, the tragedy and agony that no-one, especially the mother, was watching over her wisely, perceptively, nurturingly. Rhiannon
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