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Holidays
With thought of the Fry’s chocolate five boys … and memories of an eccentric old lady and her enjoyment of unpractical plans and dreams
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on Isaiah 43:1,2
[Continuing the hymn-for-Sundays series] The trials may heap on us – when will they cease? Their strength can quite suddenly roar and increase. The...
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A mischievous little bird called …
A little bird ‘IwanTit’* around my eyes will flit and perch …
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The Secret of Contentment
[Continuing the hymn-for-Sundays series] Greed attacking gratitude, discontent … Want to ‘get’ more than to give – what’s the greatest thing to own? …
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Fun?
Why make light of evil dark? and laugh at fright … but may be really scared – … All bad taste, and plastic waste.
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I like what you have written
Posted on Tue, 03 Nov 2015
I like what you have written about the false glitz and warmth at Christmas, the wearying distractions to true delight and happiness, satisfying service, and worship.
The early part also made me think of 'when the time had fully come, God...
Read full commentPosted in The Image Of The Christ Child
Pleasant companionship
Posted on Tue, 03 Nov 2015
Pleasant companionship warming the hard seasons. Interesting interjection of the respite in winter from summer labours. Rhiannon
Read full commentPosted in Novemberesque
gives the feeling of no-one
Posted on Wed, 28 Oct 2015
gives the feeling of no-one to remember and grieve him, memory of him blown away. Sad. Rhiannon
Read full commentPosted in 'Incident on the Line'
This did make me think, Tina,
Posted on Tue, 27 Oct 2015
This did make me think, Tina, of so many who feel the loss of a daughter or son of whom they never had good memories, a loss double. Memories so sweet must hurt so much, but you wouldn't have not had them, I'm sure.
I did so like the last...
Read full commentPosted in Baobabs and Bedouins
This is very effective. The
Posted on Sat, 24 Oct 2015
This is very effective. The early part and the contrast.
If it is how you are feeling now, I would say, Seek out that music of heart again! Personally, of course, I would pray, and read God's love letter (the Bible) to me when feeling...
Read full commentPosted in Silence in my heart
This reminded me somehow
Posted on Fri, 23 Oct 2015
This reminded me somehow about the book of Ecclesiastes, where the imperfectness of everything, incompleteness in this life is shown. I think maybe I'll have to come back to this, there's so much there, so many different metaphors to think about...
Read full commentPosted in Who am I?
bit of fun, quirky. Dreamy
Posted on Wed, 21 Oct 2015
bit of fun, quirky. Dreamy view, then the slog (reinvigorated?) Rhiannon
Read full commentPosted in Monday Night
I liked this too, though I
Posted on Wed, 21 Oct 2015
I liked this too, though I also thought you might think of a stronger climax line. The last but one seems to balance the third - disjointedness and then your world coming together, presumably a sense of things making sense, fitting together,...
Read full commentPosted in discord to harmony (revised)
Not easy to show friendship
Posted on Wed, 14 Oct 2015
Not easy to show friendship when someone is wanting to withdraw to private memories, but to show affection, and will be there when conversation wanted? Rhiannon
Read full commentPosted in Where the Seabirds Fly
You seem to have captured
Posted on Mon, 12 Oct 2015
You seem to have captured something of that strange feeling of convalesence (salt on the arm!), when the mind (and body) is not working quite normally yet (slight temperature still, perhaps), and trying to come to terms with life again. The sight...
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