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I love the idea of weaving a
Posted on Sat, 19 Dec 2015
I love the idea of weaving a tapestry of magnificent potentiality, inspired by the idea of known harmony and tune. You show determination to achieve your goals in this poem. Nicely done.
You summed the weather up perfectly once again Rhiannon. I must admit to enjoying this weather you describe, even for walking in, just find it cheers me up...you probably think I'm a bit strange saying that...ha...ha! ...
you've summed up December perfectly. I think to have the seasons written in such beautiful poetry, you can look back and remember the year and keep it as a record.
I like the descriptions in this piece, the warmth of the cafe, the dark rain, the umbrella holding up its arms in dispair as the wind blows. I could picture the scene, as you brought it to life.
I love the idea of weaving a
Posted on Sat, 19 Dec 2015
I love the idea of weaving a tapestry of magnificent potentiality, inspired by the idea of known harmony and tune. You show determination to achieve your goals in this poem. Nicely done.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Tune
I just love your sense of
Posted on Sat, 19 Dec 2015
I just love your sense of humour. Great read.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in AlterNativity - Part 4 - Get Away! In A Manger
Hi Rhiannon,
Posted on Fri, 18 Dec 2015
Hi Rhiannon,
I love the rhythm and rhyme in this poem, with its picturesque view of the river and the twigs being carried by the rush of water.
I could see the birds in their splendour, while the wind shook the pines. The sound of...
Read full commentPosted in … The Bright Day Interlude following
Great poem Tina,
Posted on Thu, 17 Dec 2015
Great poem Tina,
you clearly worked hard on this one.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in No Fairy Tale
This is brilliant and made me
Posted on Wed, 16 Dec 2015
This is brilliant and made me laugh with not only the accent, but the story line too.
Thanks for sharing this seasonal comedy. ...
Read full commentPosted in AlterNativity - Part 3 - A Room At The Inn
You summed the weather up
Posted on Wed, 16 Dec 2015
You summed the weather up perfectly once again Rhiannon. I must admit to enjoying this weather you describe, even for walking in, just find it cheers me up...you probably think I'm a bit strange saying that...ha...ha! ...
Read full commentPosted in A Bleak Interlude
Hi Rhiannon,
Posted on Mon, 14 Dec 2015
Hi Rhiannon,
you've summed up December perfectly. I think to have the seasons written in such beautiful poetry, you can look back and remember the year and keep it as a record.
I do so enjoy your natural nature poems.
Jenny...
Read full commentPosted in December
I like the descriptions in
Posted on Thu, 03 Dec 2015
I like the descriptions in this piece, the warmth of the cafe, the dark rain, the umbrella holding up its arms in dispair as the wind blows. I could picture the scene, as you brought it to life.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in An evening in Amsterdam
A beautifully mastered look
Posted on Sun, 22 Nov 2015
A beautifully mastered look at the how children perceive colour, almost like a rainbow.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in 'Shadows To The Child'
Posted on Sat, 21 Nov 2015
memories come out of hiding when we look for them, but often they are never what they seem, just a fading glimpse of what we want them to be.
A haunting poem indeed Tina.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in For Sale - Sold as Seen
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