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Dennis Wolf
Still at it. Yea, I know I'm hopeless, no skill, no talent, little motivation etc. Does it actually matter.. Don't really know. I mostly just post my first effort drafts, no revision, no editing etc. I'll probably write countless new iterations later, once the whole thing is complete.. Or maybe it'll just end up collecting digital dust, I don't really know.
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Posted on Wed, 19 Jan 2011
There are bits that aren't necessary, and bits missing.. Or, just bits I've expected...
Like a pale moonlight. A feeling of vulnerability in the roiling fog..
'dreams prevailed' would be enough where falling asleep is...
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Great work
Posted on Thu, 16 Sep 2010
It might be a cliche.. But the beginning part, with the uneasy sensing of a presence
. It immediately brought to mind Dance of Death, a song by Iron Maiden. I've recently read some of Edgar Allen Poe's short tales, and this one reminds me...
Read full commentPosted in A TREK NEVER TO BE FORGOTTEN