Even when the tears stop falling,
I'll never stop thinking about you.
Even when the light shines brighter,
I'll never stop dreaming of you.
And even though I know better,
the novelty of a perfect ending
stirs emotion inside of this room.
Desperate romantic
Published by Beeme on September 3, 2009 - 18:32
Comments
MistakenMagic | September 3, 2009 - 20:57
'And even though I know better,
the novelty of a perfect ending
stirs emotion inside of this room.'
- simply gorgeous! This is brilliant Beeme, one of my all time favourites of yours! Be very proud of this one ;)
Magic xxx
Nathan Bednarek | September 4, 2009 - 00:00
Short and sweet. So much emotion in just a few words! Well done!
Nathan.
Beeme | September 4, 2009 - 07:49
Thank you Magic and Nathan, really glad you enjoyed this so much! :)
Beeme xx
threeleafshamrock | September 5, 2009 - 17:33
Excellent! Short pieces are hard to do well. Really enjoyable and one of your best.
Chris XXX
Beeme | September 5, 2009 - 18:30
Thank you very much, Chris. Glad you enjoyed this so much :)
Beeme xx
Nolan | January 8, 2010 - 20:15
Beautiful really! Keep your feet on the ground and reach for the stars!
Beeme | January 8, 2010 - 21:48
Thankyou Nolan :-)