"Russet Leaves"

I like this Julie. It captures a moment very clearly. Your best piece for a while - and a cherry for you!

Hi Julie. This is lovely. Congrats on the lovely ripe cherry xx

This is beautiful Julie, well done on the well deserved cherry!

I love these lines;

'Along comes the toad could be
fluorescent in the dark'

and

'The candescent moon floats across the sky
a nip in the air with dark nights drawing in'

Reading your poem really cheered me up :)

Beeme xx Hope you well xx

Well done on the cherry Julie! I love this :) Especially these lines:

'The cat's about for birds and mice
but the toad is getting bigger still'

not quite sure why! hehe

A really super poem!

Magic xxx

Hi! Beeme well I needed cheering up to,T. Shirt co; gone.got lost looking and told another co; couldn't find either.
thankyou great compliment the poem so short
the toad daughter saw as called said big. Iv'e
picked a frog up never a toad.Well use dictionary now
hence word candescent it meant what thought.
hope your well.Have a chat soon. Yes ok now many thanks.very strong wind out.
love julie xx cavalcader (:-

A million well-dones on this, Julie. Again, I almost missed it but a comment on Magic's latest poem alerted me to it. BRILLIANT. And a big 'well done':-)

Tina xx

I really, really like this Julie. A very good read and a well deserved cherry. Well done!

Nathan xox

I'm glad you commented on my work julie. Your work has a sort of honesty tio it which makes it so ejoyable.

new Shackford
yes, all links and true, or
happenings.Thankyou great
comment. must get to read
yours and other's brilliant
work.poem's stories.
julie x cavalcader (;-

new MistakenMagic
Gee! can't believe a little one like this
got a cherry. But Silver-spun-sand and I decided
tighten up one title capitals kindly, so done all nearly thanks much neater
well again this is true!
daughter called and said toad big one
sitting there,mayb pregnant I know we had a frog back garden but this she said was
big as your hand eeee! I can't tell difference maybe
should wear fluorescent jacket! as get killed.
On computer and I thought money spiders? no ants
juliex cavalcader (:-

New Natahn Bednarak
Cor! thanks lovely comment
all true I was shaken and stirred to get cherry!
but all Abctales helping me cut down and not
waffle on.Big Issue last week ABCtales Guest Edit t.cook great poets in.
julie x cavalcader (:-

new MistakenMagic
Gee! glad you liked it ,can't believe a little one like this
got a cherry.
this is true!
daughter called and said toad big one
sitting there,maybe pregnant I know we had a frog back garden but this she said was
big as your hand eeee! I can't tell difference maybe
should wear fluorescent jacket! as get killed.I was
on computer and I thought money spiders?lucky no ants
julie x cavalcader (:-

Silver-spun-sand
thankyou and all your help well it was jumbled mess before you advised me kindly.I thought looked bold wrong?
I didn't see it luckily toad,
but had a frog in back garden few years
and they get squashed.It was all so quick
The paper had poem in Jim the spider how they
caught it in jar took it away, got back in car.
home there was Jim spider again.I hate them.
julie x cavalcader (:-

t.cook
Wow! thankyou compliment Tony and rosey cherry. the toad was true! I didn't see it.
daughter saw it when called
julie x cavalcader (:-