Silver Wings

Flows magically - well done :)

You have obviously worked really hard on this, Julie. And it shows;-) I like the structure - something a bit new for you. It works well.

Tina x

A good one, Julie. Well done.

Luigi x

full of sparkly images and has a lovely festive feel,:-)

:) Everythings been said, a true masterpiece with great imagery to cover all my problems this morning. Well done, great writing as usual.Looks like your one of those who writes best during this festive season.

I can only add how beautiful I found this and that it really is a masterpiece that you should be really proud of. I love all of the images and it read so well. I want to thank you, Julie for all the support you have given me and I am planning to do another 'What is it' festive addition! I will post it in the next couple of days :)

Beeme xx

new Lugi_pagano
Thankyou luigi when
low seems come out bit better
but yours amazing.
julie x cavalcader (:-

Hi, Julie. Have sent you a message. Check your email. Poem's going great. Am really pleased for you.

Tina x

You wear your heart on your sleeve and it shines through in your work - keep it coming - :):):)

It's alright.

Hi back, Julie;-) You are amazing...and I really mean that.

Just a couple more, very small, 'tweaks' So here we go, in your very own words...

A card...with, 'To a very special Mum' on,
in silver-written lines.

At the end of the day, Julie...punctuation is the 'icing on the cake'. The words are the thing, and you sure have a way with them;-)

Tina xx

Hi there, Julie. Poem's great!!!

Hope you have a good day, full of sunshine. The grass is white with frost where I live, and the sunrise was beautiful;-)

Tina x

new angel-from-hell
thankyou lovely comment.
very bad day, go in my room
hence do a bit better when
I am on my own.
thankyou.Amazed as just switched on
lovely comments, and may add more cos fab;
card later I see daughter must
have paid to have it printed on,
no correction not sure!
julie x

It seems with every piece you post you take a step up the poetry ladder ;-) You are writing more and more excellent poetry and this is one of those poems that really put a smile on my face. A truly beautiful poem. Well done.

Nathan xox

new Pinda
Thankyou I felt just like you
so I went to my room, came out
bit better.I was thinking of you
paper's got your groupyou like
coming here!
well I try.I just come in here!
and switched wow! youv'e
all cheered me up.
julie x cavalcader (:-

new Shoe
Well I'm reading your's to their good.
This was at my lowest so into my room,
he's out. and scribble.Thankyou so much
commment.The comments brightened up my day.
I love sparkle this year! and last two lines
true come from an a card with and silver
last two lines, not sure daughter had done! as Mum's card.or not.
Yes, I have imagination now maybe bit to vivid.
thankyou must read more of yours.
julie x cavalcader (:-

Silver-Spun-Sand
Got your kind email, couldn't answer back not sure which line to press' on computer of your's abctales
so left kind comment their for you.
julie x cavalcader (:-

new Lady-Bathsheba
Thanyou experiences of life!
some good some otherwise.
thankyou comments.
julie. x

new Beeme
Thankyou x so much for
lovely comment,foul day
and him.so went to my room
and bed just got out to switch on
thrilled your's and all comments.
No! your the one that can do it your
born to it young, but thankyou.
julie x cavalcader (:-

new Silver-Spun-Sand
Altered thank's a million,Lost what doing
so I'll brief you posted
comment lost it since.
The Card is Mother's day one.
she may have paid have it printed; in Silver print and her word's I imagine!not sure.
Silver lines may be her idea.
julie x cavalcader (:-

new Lady Bathsheba
Thankyou lovely comment.
I don't always get it right!
especially my Amalgamated Nursery
Rhyme one, jumbled.But seems when
annoyed at my lowest go to my room
he is out again, scribble bit better.
and if I am out caf'e better.
Yes I have vivid
imaginery sight now, writing group
co-ordinator said so after few years. and
homless went,no punctuation you can tell?
and then heard Abctales
most mine are on life.
This just came, card
thankyou so much.Iv'e just got up and switched on
I am so amazed and thankful to all comments coming through abctales.
julie x cavalcader (:-

new Silver-Spun-Sand
Well1 cold Ray's in I am
about to go out shops
Your perfectly right
it's going up the chart's?
joke.
julie x

new Silver-Spun-Sand
Thankyou answered you
on another comment as can't
work computer read and
altered as you kindly say and
added more you read and let me know.
Thanks a million.
julie x

new Nathan Bednarek
Thankyou so much because
one never know's people's
lives do they! Well what
beautiful comment from a well
good Author yourself and many on here!
Yes, it was mean't to be funny,
It was a foul day.So glad you liked
it, I first put Silver R.A.F wing's
bu thought may not be allowed to put it.
punctuation etc; Iv'e never done
Church always said focus I could do nothing.
Keep up the good work. I want to weave her
into the poem, not sure how yet!
Quite often I fall down the ladder.Miss key's
re-do.But I don't have to think long now!
My comments to long, but I pick out lines
and explain it back, some I can't.bless you+.
what subject's next?
So many say would like a comment and
TrevorMaytum and all new and some other's
julie xx cavalcader(:-

new Silver-Spun-Sand
How is that got your lovely email,
can't always work out which line to press!
times I finish something in comment don't
look at keyboard, if don't put other
glasses on I loose all piece Iv'e replied
to whom!if pressed wrong button quick1
Is this ok!now, as may have
to much punctuation on you
haven't put.No I couldn't do a thing!
But through you, can see it all shaping up.
Many many thank's.I just love 'icing on the cake'
Used to love eating it out the bowl umm!
love julie x

new Silver-Spun-Sand
I see Abc been going few years
so harder for me.
Thankyou so much when
I seem to be
at my lowest! it seems
go to bedroom scribble
a bit comes our right!
or a caf'e alone.
First I put R.A.F have
Silver wings'
took it out,
Then I looked up dictionary
found a word through your
kind help peradventure not sure
would have gone!Then I have a
beautiful mum's card from
daughter in 'silver lines'
Abctales mugs tea tastes great
no stickers on I did is better.
I bought Susan Boyle's I dreamed
a dream all have one! a dream'
amazing.How she has came through all.
julie x cavalcader (:-

Very pretty! Nice how you bring in the Lone Ranger! Haven't heard for a while? Hope all's well. I'm fine thanks &&

New angel-from-hell
I like Julie’s poems too. An ex-girl-friend was also kicked out you probably know her. She was causing too much trouble. Sorry to hear, read Calcabaderl it’s very therapeutic.

Dear Carbaderl,
Please to send me a snapshot I'm dying to see what you look like. Glad the allergy is better and tell your daughter take it easy on the foxes you know what happened last time.
Cheers! Nolan
PS. Don't mess with spirits that's bad stuff. Evil. Vile.

New Nolan
Thankyou comment.Your right,
mine says,Tonto was the Indian,
The Lone Ranger was the rider of
Silver.But it took shape!so well
after Silver-Spun-Sand help and advising me
kindly.I think daughter may have paid have it
done in Silver writing maybe last few lines not sure.
She sometimes gets a photo of me somewhere,as surprise of me when very young like a look a like in middle of card amazing got to think poem or story.
julie