The waning moon follows us around
from clouds of dust the
stars sparkling
cascading
and twirling down
with angel's spanned wings
watching over us
OH!
heart that beats so fast
and cries!
out for peace on earth.
comments please or alter verses
Comments
Beeme | July 17, 2009 - 21:31
I found this fascinating and beautiful great work Cavalcaderl x
Jupiter | July 17, 2009 - 21:48
Hi Julie. I think Beeme is right - fascinating - but I think that is because I don't understand ;-).
I just wanted to support you - I'm rubbish at these unobvious pieces - but it sounds nice ;-)
elements | July 18, 2009 - 00:20
I think Percy Bysshe Shelley wrote a poem called The Waning Moon also.
Cavalcaderl | July 18, 2009 - 20:55
new elements
just remembered hymn call "Jesus shall reign o er'e
the sun".ends The Moon shall wax and wane no more!
used to sing at church.anyone know it send please!
julie x
Cavalcaderl | July 19, 2009 - 07:16
New Jupiter I think the word hate is love they say
but a better word be irresponsbile.Many people stressed out now papers say in all works and circumstances that's why any kind creative works can try!
j x
Cavalcaderl | July 19, 2009 - 07:37
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lenchenelf | July 19, 2009 - 23:06
Pretty, dreamy and conjures up a lot of images that you could work with. atb Lenax
Cavalcaderl | August 8, 2009 - 09:01
new elements thankyou comments.Waning Moon can be expression to.No I don't know Poets you mentioned tell me?
nice but I don't read poetry books much
I have one called Dr's Surgery given to me.
and somebodies? Diaries 2nd hand.
Maybe I should try get one someone
once close to me did Shelley! and Keats!
can't do all that. its writing group and
homeless we make up list of words.
pictures.filmed recently
talent brought out..
wonderful work. after
21???? to 90 plus no one wants us especially
over 5o-8o ages and younger groups belong.
or places think to old.
But
ABCtales in Argus here so
just had a go comp; Love all comments
coming in and one cherry.
so I shoved them all on.
But readings (3) at 1st wow sky high.under all
adversities.In The bIG iSSUE. pay and co.
had to pay etc;one in book @ £15 time
to publish story cost £100 plus.
Pensioner's cannot afford that
writing group free.
Abc t.Cook I Read in The "Argus" here
great only £5 comp.Read? about and
I put in my 1st comp;
My late Birthday Surprise. True.
"Green Eyes" and some others in "Argus "free.
we did sheltered homes singing
dancing some musical,writing groups mixed homeless.
are yu poet.so many helped me here!
Jennifer,
Jupiter.Silver-Spun-Sand xx Beeme
Richard Prov Lennie.Sarah Wilson,Whiskey
many more I haven't put on time as of fete.
gobsmacked! in 4 books one pays, not any more?"
do few "Argus" free. and to many Angel titles
so decided call it such. But hubby been to fete
and come back surprise 2 "Angel" pictures great Wings! and children.
julie x cavalcader.
Should I cut down on length of mine.answer please.
Cavalcaderl | September 29, 2009 - 08:35
new Beeme thankyou forgot to say been hectic time?
and so I scribbled few lines. I was "Waining"
bad inside incident.glad you liked it.Going to wedding soon nice day out.
julie x
I always wain about something
according to mine!
pleasing him,how years changed
us.
julie cavalcader x (:-
I'd mostly help in church
when I was left years on my
own here while he visited
his Mum. Xmas times.
j x
Cavalcaderl | October 13, 2009 - 09:03
new lenchenelf thankyou well have to get my
brain working, been fowl day it was how I felt
jumbled to-gether.I think I was waining inside
over incident not asked or invited.secretcy.
mobile family 80th no intention invite!
julie cavalvader. -:)