It can make your world dissapear and die
It can make a giant fall and cry
But it'll make you feel like you can fly
Thats what love can do.
It will penetrate deep within your soul
Till your heart has turned as black as coal
But can make you feel like you are whole
Thats what love can do.
It can turn your thoughts to suicide
Make a brave man runaway and hide
But can fill your heart with joy and pride
Thats what love can do.
It can cut you like the sharpest steel
Strips your skin away like orange peel
But you'll think your on a happy pill
Thats what love can do.
It can turn you from your closest friend
Make you do things things that you can't defend
But will one day bring all war to end
Thats what love can do.
Comments
Denzella | January 30, 2012 - 13:22
Hello Edenfalls,
Liked this one too. If only love could do all that.
Your rhymes are very good and the rhythm seems almost song like.
Thanks for sharing.
Moya
Edenfalls | February 1, 2012 - 13:51
Many thanks again.
Sooz006 | July 4, 2012 - 01:15
it sure can.
You didn't quite get away with the half rhyme of pill with steel and peel, almost, but just not quite.
Another good one you old romantic, you.
Edenfalls | July 4, 2012 - 09:24
I know! Must have had that extra glass of wine that night!