Dear Darling

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from the ABC set Other Peoples Letters

Hi Darling,

Don't usually write letters so apologise if my spelling is crapp.

Have tried to call you a few times over the past few days but no joy, they kept saying that your number was no longer available. I seem to have the wrong number somehow.

Look, I know I was out of order on Thursday and things got a bit out of hand but I'm hoping we can put that behind us and move on.

You have to admit it was funny really, especiallly when you threw that drink over me and called my a stalker and nutter. Hilarious, the people in that posh restaurent must have wondered what was going on!

Maybe I jumped the gun a bit and got ahead of myself by proposing like that, but I thought we were getting along great. You seemed to like me and I reallly like you. I am completely in love with you.

They say that you instantly know when you find the right person and I know that its you.

Doesn't matter what anyone says, we should be together, for ever!

Time isn't importatnt to me, its not about time. Its about love.

Thursday was really something for me and it's a shame it ended the way it did but I know deep down you didn't mean it, I'm sure in time you'll feel the same way too.

I know I've only met you once, on Thursday when I followed you to that restaurent. I thought it would be a great suprise, thats why I've been phoning you a lot and then putting the phone down. I was scared to talk to you cos your so beautiful.

The police came round today and told me not to contact you again or they will prosecute. Not sure what that means but I wont give up cos we need to be together. I even went round to where you work but they say youve moved to another office.

Hope this letter finds you.

Love Allwys.

Billy.

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Comments

Denzella | January 29, 2012 - 08:49

Hello Jolono,

Enjoyed this story. It made a change from your other work. However, I didn't think you paid quite so much attention to this one because it seemed a bit rushed. Although I do think it's a good idea to experiment but as you know I am a big fan of Julian and Roy!

Still much enjoyed!

Moya

jolono | February 1, 2012 - 09:30

You picked up on this exactly. It was rushed, very rushed. I was trying to finish it before having to go out. But as you say, sometimes its good to try something a bit different. Trouble is Roy and Julian seem to have taken over!