Jake sat in his Uncle Toms car in silence. He liked his Uncle Tom, he was the “dark sheep” of the family, his Dads brother, but not like his Dad at all.
He had his own painting and decorating firm in Stepney, always seemed to have a few bob on him and was a proper “wide boy”. He was a couple of years younger than Jakes Dad and Jake hadn’t seen him since he went away.
Jake was thinking about the list in his pocket, the list would lead him to the three men that conned him into killing the Russian. The list contained everything he could remember about each of them, funny how you suddenly remember things over the years and Jake had plenty of time to remember, things like accents, accents are very distinctive, for example he could now tell a South London accent from a North or an East, he could tell different dialects as well. When he first went inside, northerners were just northerners; they all sounded the same, but over time he could tell a Yorkshire accent from a Lancashire or Derbyshire one. There were lots of things on the list that he could now pursue and he was confident of a successful outcome. But no one must know, no one.
After an hour’s drive, Tom pulled into a pub car park.
“Come on Jake; let me buy you a pint”
“Cheers Uncle Tom, I thought you’d never ask!”
The two of them laughed as they got out of the car and entered the saloon bar of the pub. Tom ordered two pints of Stella and he and Jake took their seats in a quiet corner. Tom waited for Jake to take his first gulps of beer. Jake didn’t disappoint him. He took the beer to his lips and sank half of it in one go.
“First one?” Tom asked.
“We did manage to get the odd can inside but it was always cheap shit and then you’d probably end up sharing it with two others, so yes it’s my first REAL beer in almost ten years”
Tom put his hand into the inside of his pocket and pulled out a mobile phone.
“This is for you Jake, it’s not top of the range but it’s good enough, it’s pay as you go and I’ve put fifty quid on it so it should last you for a while, everyone has to have a phone these days!”
“Cheers Uncle Tom”
“Enough of the Uncle please; you’re making me feel like an old man, just Tom from now on OK?”
Jake smiled.
“Sure Tom”
Tom once again took something out of his inside pocket, it was an envelope, he handed it to Jake.
“Ok, no arguments, you’ll need a bit of cash to get you going, we both know your Mum and Dad aren’t in a position to help, so there’s three hundred quid in there, take it and pay me back when you’re back on your feet”
“Thanks Tom, I will pay you back, promise”
Jake finished his beer and Tom went up to get another round. When he returned he sat down and looked at Jake in more of a serious way.
“So Jake, what’s your plans?”
“Not sure really, have to report in to my case officer in two days, he said he would try to get me work, not confident of that though, so will try to find something myself, can’t exactly go back and try for my old job back can I, not after shooting their biggest client!”
Tom didn’t want to laugh, but couldn’t help himself, then Jake started and it ended up with them both roaring with laughter. Tom composed himself.
“If it’s any consolation Jake, from what I’ve heard, that Russian was a nasty bastard, responsible for all sorts of terrible thing back in Russia, so he had it coming, if it wasn’t you it would have been someone else, trust me, no one mourned his death”
“Thanks Tom, but it still gets to me, you know, how it all happened….”
Tom interrupted him.
“Listen, what’s done is done; we can’t turn the clocks back, so just move on, OK?”
“Yeh sure”
“Look as far as a job is concerned, if you can’t get anything let me know, as long as you can hold a paint brush you can work for me, it will only be £50 a day but that’s what I pay my other non-skilled guys, so no preferential treatment for you, take a few weeks then let me know and if you fancy a few days in the sun, we've still got the apartment in Spain, we don't use it as much as we should so it's yours anytime”
Jake nodded and thanked Tom, then the two of them got back into the car and headed back to East London.
It took them another half an hour before Jake started to recognise his surroundings, a lot had changed in ten years, some pubs that had been landmarks back then were now either mini markets of flats, the local cinema was now a “Religious Healing Centre”, he had no idea what that meant.
Suddenly they were turning into his street and pulling up outside his house. Tom looked at him.
“Ready Jake?”
Jake was suddenly nervous, what he’d dreamed of for all those years was now here.
“Yeh, let’s do it!”
Comments
Edenfalls | July 12, 2012 - 12:11
Good introduction to this new part of Jakes story, i liked the reference to "the list", something that i'm sure you'll develop in the next few parts. Nice dialogue with his Uncle.
Building nicely!
jolono | July 12, 2012 - 12:38
Thanks mate, glad you liked it.
hudsonmoon | July 12, 2012 - 13:57
Sorry I missed the old part of Jake's story, Jolono. The fact that it stands up on its own without having read the other parts says something. I look forward to more. The pace is great and so is the dialogue.
jolono | July 12, 2012 - 14:15
Thanks Rich, in a nut shell, Jake went to prison for killing someone, he did it, but was blackmailed into doing it by three guys. Now he's out and looking to find out who they were and why they set him up, but ultimately revenge!
There you are saved you about an hours reading!
Thanks mate.
Sooz006 | July 14, 2012 - 13:00
Tom once again took something out of his inside pocket... this is really bulky, I'd just say Tom took something else out of...
in more of a serious way... I'd delete this, it's unnecessary.
mini markets of flats, ... or flats?
Great stuff, I'm glad you're back on it. I'd like to know more about the differences that Jake's confronted with, what adjustments does he have to make and what's different after ten years of being encased.
Really enjoyed this and it was like reading an old friend.
jolono | July 14, 2012 - 19:45
Thanks Sooz,may have uploaded it in a bit of a rush without proofing first so will go through it again and have another look!
Glad you're enjoying it.
Denzella | July 15, 2012 - 19:26
Jolono,
This is good. I'm so glad you decided against the other ending. If only for selfish reasons because I really enjoy reading about Jake.
Keep 'em coming, mate!
Moya
jolono | July 15, 2012 - 20:46
Thanks Moya, I know where it's going but just need to get it down on paper now!