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A vision beyond reality

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Published by jolono on December 1, 2011 - 11:41
from the ABC set Poems of Life and Love

A naked woman at my door?
Could this be real, could I be sure?
Standing there all covered in paint
Vinyl Matt I think, how very quaint.
A big green budgie on her head
Just laying there, I think its dead
She's talking now, i think its spanish
Won't close my eyes in case she'll vanish
Her pubic hair is blue and curly
A full grown woman, not just a girlie
Her arms stretched out to welcome me
To heal my pain and set me free
Her lips are cute and pouting now
And behind her bum a lovely tail
Strange red eyes all shining brightly
Is this a vision from the almighty?
Sent down to me from up above
Some kind of catholic mother god?
Is this a warning, I must stop drinking
It's certainly a cause for thinking
Maybe its time to give it up
But first just have one more small cup
A wee small dram all dark and dandy
This really is fantastic brandy!

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Comments

Archie_Macjoyce | December 1, 2011 - 12:00

Sounds more like LSD than brandy...

jolono | December 1, 2011 - 12:04

Ahh, now thats a whole new poem.

Archie_Macjoyce | December 1, 2011 - 12:14

...or Katie Eating Ten-Armed Mice In Neptune's Ether.

jolono | December 1, 2011 - 12:16

...or Simon dancing with a one armed monkey whilst skating on frozen custard?

Archie_Macjoyce | December 1, 2011 - 12:20

That sounds far out. Never tried that before.

Denzella | December 21, 2011 - 20:47

It's just plain funny! "Is this a vision from the Almighty" Blimey, let's hope not. "Some kind of Catholic mother God" might just pay you another visit after this. Really enjoyed it. If you're Catholic then hope you not walking round with sack load of guilt on your back. Guilt is something Catholics do well!

Happy Christmas to you and yours.

jolono | December 21, 2011 - 20:53

Thanks for reading Denzella, merry Christmas to you and yours as well....

MelsOlive | March 23, 2012 - 16:29

Love!! Super trippy!!
"She's talking now, i think its spanish
Won't close my eyes in case she'll vanish" (Fav Part!!!)

- Mels Olive

jolono | March 23, 2012 - 20:01

Thanks Mels, haven't thought about this one for ages!

Shannan | April 25, 2012 - 09:20

Totally made me smile whilst picturing :-)
Thanks for that

Shannan | April 25, 2012 - 09:21

Totally made me smile whilst picturing :-)
Thanks for that

jolono | April 25, 2012 - 09:46

Thanks Shannan.

Clinton Morgan | July 18, 2012 - 21:39

That was fantastic! Should be read aloud.

jolono | July 18, 2012 - 22:18

Thanks Clinton, seems like years ago!