i have been busy
By magicdarer
Tue, 09 Apr 2013
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been busy since i last spoke to you
done lots of things
grown into a man
i have held down a job bought a house
had sex
girlfriends
done a degree
now doing another
not spoken to you in some time
i know how it ends
but i don't know the details
fact is
you know more than me
but i have done a lot
been through a lot
i know i don't get a prize
or a card
in fact i don't think i will get much at all
just want to thank you for the welcome
you called me 353454
now i am free
what can you do?
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Did you just give us your
Did you just give us your number?? Anyways...
The tone of the poem seemed passive and angry at the same time. I don't know how. I Liked that you were able to say all you've done while being totally humble. It's a nice poem.
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