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Published by magicdarer on July 3, 2012 - 00:44
from the ABC set love

I threw you a million girls
You turned your head
You looked down
You ignored the pull
Yet you were single

I offered you a million jobs
You stayed home
You closed the curtains
You scratched your arm
Yet you were keen

I gave you the knowledge to live
You ate to excess
You put on weight
You did not exercise enough
Yet you were athletic

I gave you loving parents
You doubted their love
You disrespected them
You were ashamed of them
Yet they were you

But you were right all along
It's your life
You do what you want
I am in you and with you always

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Comments

scratch | July 7, 2012 - 09:25

I'm liking this one a lot Magicdarer.

Welcome to the site

magicdarer | July 7, 2012 - 09:54

#grins#

thanks for liking this so much, and for your kind welcome to the site. It means a lot to me.

seashore | July 9, 2012 - 12:38

Brilliant!

magicdarer | July 9, 2012 - 13:02

Dear Editors, thank you for giving me the cherries on this one, I feel it is a special one. Thanks for the encouragement.

nadineuq | July 10, 2012 - 23:02

I love it! you have a real talent there :)

magicdarer | July 11, 2012 - 07:37

Thanks Seashore, and thanks Nadine; I read one of your stories and I think you have real talent too.

nadineuq | July 12, 2012 - 01:11

:D thanks

mrskatehowell | July 22, 2012 - 21:03

First one and you got a cherry; WOW!
well done, really enoyed this. keep up the great work :) Kate

magicdarer | July 22, 2012 - 21:42

Thanks Kate, I will bottle up your kind words and and use some today and keep some for tomorrow. x