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It's about time you came back now

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Published by magicdarer on August 1, 2012 - 11:31
from the ABC set love

Too long
I feel your absence
Like cool drink
Waits for a mouth

Too long
Your presence
Becomes more memory
Than fact

Too long
The loss I feel
Is filled with everything
but you

Too long
You can come back
Come back into my arms
Please

Too long has not become
too much
but I feel the lack of you
As if you are dead

Please
Do not be dead
Please
Come back soon

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Comments

hoalarg1 | August 1, 2012 - 12:36

Really quite moving, MD. Tugs at the heart.

magicdarer | August 1, 2012 - 13:39

Thanks man.

shoe | August 1, 2012 - 19:50

I could read poetry like this all day, few words, much said.

magicdarer | August 1, 2012 - 21:16

Thanks shoe. Yeah there is something nice about a readable clean poem without words that are too complex.

harrietmacmillan | August 26, 2012 - 19:35

Rather painfully close to the bone.

magicdarer | August 26, 2012 - 20:43

Thanks for stopping by. Some connection between this and your "tract" poem, yours is genious though: a mercedes to my mazda.

harrietmacmillan | August 26, 2012 - 20:52

Not at all. Yours is pared down and raw, something I wish I was brave enough to do :)

magicdarer | August 26, 2012 - 21:09

Interesting. Thanks. :-)

denni1 | October 23, 2012 - 10:23

Did they? Come back .. Dx

magicdarer | November 17, 2012 - 21:00

Hey denni.. I left the country, they found someone else. Hurtful but happy they are not alone, sort of. I made a decision, and this was the cost. Let me know how you are getting on denni.