It's about time you came back now

By magicdarer

Wed, 01 Aug 2012
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5 comments
 

Too long
I feel your absence
Like cool drink
Waits for a mouth

Too long
Your presence
Becomes more memory
Than fact

Too long
The loss I feel
Is filled with everything
but you

Too long
You can come back
Come back into my arms
Please

Too long has not become
too much
but I feel the lack of you
As if you are dead

Please
Do not be dead
Please
Come back soon

Certificate U
Love

Comments

Submitted by hoalarg1 on
Really quite moving, MD. Tugs at the heart.

 

Submitted by shoe on
I could read poetry like this all day, few words, much said.

 

Submitted by harrietmacmillan on
Rather painfully close to the bone.

Submitted by harrietmacmillan on
Not at all. Yours is pared down and raw, something I wish I was brave enough to do :)

Submitted by denni1 on
Did they? Come back .. Dx