My first love

By magicdarer

Tue, 10 Jul 2012
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You were perfect in every way
From the moment I saw you
Small and compact
You had wonderful brown hair

I wanted to get to know you
figure out what made you tick
Protect you, be with you
Smell you

I used to look into your big dark
Eyes and wonder what are you thinking
I loved your cute ways
Your stillness and your energy

But sadly those days are over
And I can no longer call you mine
I am sorry if I let you down
My sweet, wonderful gerbil

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Comments

Submitted by Linda Wigzell Cress on
I enjoyed this. It sounded like my husband going on about brunettes - until the last line! Great stuff. Linda

Linda

Submitted by Linda Wigzell Cress on
Meant to add this should really be in the Poem section rather than Story. Linda

Linda

Submitted by jolono on
Yep nice one MD. Made me smile.

 

Submitted by beaste on
random and awsume,just how i like my poems =-)

Bea :-)