Paying for sex

By magicdarer

Sat, 13 Apr 2013
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3 comments
 

We both know why your here
So let's get down to it

I'll have a drink if I may first
He smirked, of course

what shall it be
A glass of water

Pure
she let it glide down her throat
enjoying the cleanse

She will enjoy the next hour
her second appointment
with this fellow

Shall we go then?
Let's

She followed him upstairs
Turning on the landing
he pulled her close

hugging her
with arm

violating her mouth
with tongue

grinding his hips into her now
his hand owned her breasts

before heading to
skirted crotch

up and down he rubbed
kissing her more tenderly now

Then breaking away
tugging her hand

leading her to bed.

after his ejaculation
he felt relief

he felt power
he had her where he wanted

She felt relief
she felt power
she had him where she wanted.

Certificate 18
Poem
Drama

Comments

Submitted by adbates on
What a coincidence we both wrote about the same theme. I love the two last stanzas.

 

Submitted by pikeruk on
I enjoyed reading this 'sexy' poem it reminded me of my youth 300 years ago ;-)) One line caused me to sit back and think, what? It was... "enjoying the cleanse..." Just doesn't seem right to me. The word 'cleanse' seems out of context to my old ears. Anyway if you don't agree with me that's fair enough. That's part of constructive criticism, it's your poem at the end of the day. Thanks for the memories...:-)))) regards Terry

 

Submitted by KPHVampireWriter on
Raw, honest and very powerful. Great poem, no holds barred and every line packs a punch. Great originality...violated her mouth, his hand owned her breasts. My only question, where are the cherries?