The Poet Who Fell in Love


from the ABC set Dear Romeo - The Love Poems

It’s taken us a long time to get here.
And I’m scared it will take me longer to get back.
Your arm sways at my side like a rusty swing.
Our fingers touch but can’t seem to attach.
They’re embarrassed I suppose.
You ask me what I’m thinking.
I reply that I’m wondering why people
Feel the need to use quite in sentences.
I find it insults the adjectives.
You laugh. That hearty, musical laugh.
Just hearing it again makes me even happier
Than when I used poignant in the correct context.
I could never tell you that every poem
Was about you. That every emotion was documented
For others to read. As they would be doing now.
We settle in the meadow.
You look even more beautiful with your face
Framed in lavender. And the long grass dances,
Praising your perfection.
You tell me I’m a cynic. Everybody’s a cynic
When it comes to love.
Then every cynic turns out to be a hypocrite.
They all end up at fortieth wedding anniversaries.
The kiss was a flash, like a heron’s bill into water.
But still it made me smile,
Wondering if we’ll reach our fortieth.

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Comments

tamara | September 2, 2008 - 21:31

Done it again!!!what a star,magic.

luigi_pagano | September 3, 2008 - 12:08

Very deep and skilfully crafted. I enjoyed it.

PS I plead guilty: I use 'quite' in sentences.

Nathan Bednarek | September 3, 2008 - 13:21

Wonderful again. You can't seem to stop writing beautiful love poems can't you? ;-) Well done, I am now officially jealous of your talent ;-P
Keep it up.

Silver Spun Sand | September 3, 2008 - 13:32

Totally wonderful. Wouldn't have missed this one for the world. Loved the line:-

"The kiss was a flash, like a heron’s bill into water..."

SSS

MistakenMagic | September 3, 2008 - 14:12

Thank you so much for the feed back everyone! I'm amazed at the response this poem has got :) I'll have to thank my muse!

anipani | September 5, 2008 - 08:38

scarily good, waht love can do! avoids the traps that writing about love can bring, this so clearly resonates with real feeling, i envy you, not just because you can write about it, but because you are inthat lovley stage of sheer madness.

Beeme | September 8, 2008 - 15:54

thats sheer magic with words, totally from the heart x k.