A breakdown in co-operation
in orchestra, or football team:
cacophony, humiliation,
a waste of training, wreck of dream.
A breakdown in co-operation
between the brain and leg and foot
will devastate the locomotion
with disability acute.
A breakdown in co-operation
between those differing in gift
will bring society’s destruction,
– each man an island all adrift.
To bring about co-operation
between those who live lands apart
needs contact, thought, appreciation,
desire, and willingness of heart.
Comments
Silver Spun Sand | August 1, 2012 - 10:07
So much truth here, Rhiannon. Brilliant for the I.P.
Tina;-)
Rhiannonw | August 1, 2012 - 10:55
Thank you, Tina, very much. Rhiannon
Sooz006 | August 1, 2012 - 23:21
Nice use of the IP.
A breakdown in co-operation
between those differing in gift
will bring society’s destruction,...really liked these lines.
Rhiannonw | August 2, 2012 - 00:01
Thank you for tellling me. Rhiannon
Denzella | August 2, 2012 - 08:38
Hello Rhiannonw
Yes a great I P. '- each man an island all adrift.'
Loved that line and so true too but all good.
Really enjoyed this.
Moya
Rhiannonw | August 2, 2012 - 09:18
Glad you did, thanks for telling me. warm regards, Rhiannon