End of days 7

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from the ABC set 200 words

He looks harassed, a little nervous, beads of sweat hanging on his forehead. I stare down at the crack in the paintwork just to the left of the door. The interview room is stifling; maybe they keep it that way on purpose.

‘… just trying to understand what happened, why you killed him.’

There had been black fire in his eyes. Those things were crawling from the pits. The world was sliding into chaos.

‘… and there were several others, weren’t there?’

They were all driven mad. The demons were taking over. There was nothing to do except fight.

‘… and we know you’d gone missing, that you’d run away.’

They trusted me – the angels, God’s army. Time was ending. I don’t know why they chose me. I agreed to lead them but all I wanted was to reach you somehow.

‘… we’re aware of the shock you had; the court will take that into account.’

What is he saying?

‘I mean what happened with your wife …’

What?

‘I’m so sorry …’

By the time they peel me off him and drag me away to my cell, his glasses are splintered and he’s spitting out broken teeth into a pool of blood on the floor.

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Comments

insertponceyfre... | July 22, 2010 - 07:30

very nice collision of the two worlds. Now I need to know what happened to his wife, please hurry up and say!

rjnewlyn | July 23, 2010 - 00:00

Thanks Insert. We'll see ...
Rob

Beeme | July 23, 2010 - 22:11

This part really quickens the pace. I need to know what happend to his wife too! Really enjoyed :)

Beeme xx

rjnewlyn | July 24, 2010 - 18:26

Thanks very much Beeme for following this - much appreciated! Rob

MistakenMagic | July 25, 2010 - 16:47

Agree with both insert and Beeme - love the growing tension! Waiting on tenterhooks ;)

Magic xxx

rjnewlyn | July 25, 2010 - 23:26

Thanks very much Magic. Part 8 will emerge at some point this week. Rob

Sooz006 | June 7, 2012 - 11:28

This is fabulous.