The Pirates... by brighteyes

Yes, humourous but also a very clever and tightly constructed narrative. Check out my website: http://www.francesmacaulayforde.com

Sorry - forgot to say congratulations on your cherry - well-deserved. Regards, Frances. Check out my website: http://www.francesmacaulayforde.com

What I liked about this poem in particular was the fact how you mixed in past-tense with present-tense. Also, you gave a fantacy of a life of a pirate, how fun it is to be one, and all of the adventures a pirate can do. Nice touch at the end as well. Trumpeteer

It hurts sometimes if you get sand on your thingy.

Thanks for the flag-up guys, and for the cherry! Was fun to write and written for a pirate-themed open mic night, though performing in a corset leads to breathy deliveyr, I've discovered. >wheeze!< "I have a room for life at the Home for the Chronically Groovy."