The Pirates... by brighteyes

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Tue, 2006-03-21 12:32

pepsoid

The Pirates... by brighteyes

http://www.abctales.com/story/brighteyes/the-pirates

Humorous bit of "light verse"! - splendid!

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Wed, 2006-03-22 02:51

Frances Macaula...

Yes, humourous but also a very clever and tightly constructed narrative. Check out my website: http://www.francesmacaulayforde.com(link is external)

Soundcloud: https://soundcloud.com/search?q=FrancesMF(link is external)

Wed, 2006-03-22 03:51

Frances Macaula...

Sorry - forgot to say congratulations on your cherry - well-deserved. Regards, Frances. Check out my website: http://www.francesmacaulayforde.com(link is external)

Soundcloud: https://soundcloud.com/search?q=FrancesMF(link is external)

Wed, 2006-03-22 10:58

Trumpeteer

What I liked about this poem in particular was the fact how you mixed in past-tense with present-tense. Also, you gave a fantacy of a life of a pirate, how fun it is to be one, and all of the adventures a pirate can do. Nice touch at the end as well. Trumpeteer

Trevor Jensen

Wed, 2006-03-22 11:04

yan

It hurts sometimes if you get sand on your thingy.

There's nothing more mind-teasing than the incomprehensible eagerly avowed -
Dennett

Wed, 2006-03-22 11:09

pepsoid

I don't generally get sand on my thingy. I try to keep it covered. :-) * P * :-)

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Fri, 2006-03-24 11:53

brighteyes

Thanks for the flag-up guys, and for the cherry! Was fun to write and written for a pirate-themed open mic night, though performing in a corset leads to breathy deliveyr, I've discovered. >wheeze!< "I have a room for life at the Home for the Chronically Groovy."

"I have a room for life at the Home for the Chronically Groovy."

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