Brighteyes - Parfum

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Tue, 2006-04-11 09:48

Brighteyes - Parfum

http://www.abctales.com/story/brighteyes/parfum

This is great. Not sure I've read much of your prose before Brighteyes. The narrative voice is really charming. The idea is cool too but it's the way it's written that drew me in.

Ta!

Tue, 2006-04-11 12:55

2Lou

'Pushing like a woman giving birth to a cactus' Excellent.

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www.fabulousmother.co.uk

Thu, 2006-04-13 14:47

brighteyes

Cheers guys! I just realised this message board is gonna seem well indulgent with my repleis to threads about myself. Just call me Narcissus. "I have a room for life at the Home for the Chronically Groovy."

"I have a room for life at the Home for the Chronically Groovy."

Thu, 2006-04-13 15:37

QueenElf

Everyone is going to have thier favourite lines, mine are : my ureathra had apparently gone into hiding like a traumatised tortoise. Just Brill! I hate peeing where people can hear me, this is a great read.

Lfuller

Fri, 2006-04-14 17:06

neilmc

Totally off-the-wall, full of great similes and dysfunctional female anatomy which I'll just have to take your word for.

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