Cade Series
Sun, 2006-11-26 00:36
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Cade Series
Hi. I am new here.
I was wondering if anyone is reading my fantasy series, named "Cade" right now. If so, any thoughts?
http://www.abctales.com/story/tova7/cade-chapter-1-2
I have posted the first 7 chapters. I have over 30 written so far.
Thanks.
I don't like trad-fantasy much either, but this is well written, with a crafty opening gambit and a neat, controlled voice, only occasionally overwritten.
Far too many cliches for my liking though - the hero's enchanted sword, his emerald heirloom, his faithful beast (is it He-Man?) plus the elf-like long-living pseudo-angel race, whose representatives here are a young, impetuous one and an old, wise one. And a prophecy to boot! I can't help feeling your skills would be better put to use tackling a different genre, or making something fresh of this hackneyed stuff.
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I'll Show You Tyrants * Fuselit * The Prowl Log * Woe's Woe
Thanks for the comments.
I can't say if its He-Man, hahahaha, because I've never READ it.