Poetry

By angel_in_my_lunchbox

First draft poetry, stuff that needs editing, criticsm and re-writing

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Ok so I am new at this and don't know how it all works???

Conditional Love

By angel_in_my_lunchbox on Fri, 12 Oct 2007

I love you on the condition That you will love me, Respect me, cherish me And forgive my foolishness That you will value my honour, My honesty and my faith That your arms will be open
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Retreat

By angel_in_my_lunchbox on Wed, 17 Oct 2007

Retreat Flee from the light of day Hide your heart in darkness Close your eyes to the hot Spears of sunlight And look to hope no more Cage your spirit Erect iron bars around your soul
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Teacup

By angel_in_my_lunchbox on Thu, 18 Oct 2007

This was written during an excercise for my writing course about an inanimate object, it made me really think about the impression we all leave on the simplest things.
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