Errata: Fifteenth Episode by rokkitnite
Thu, 2007-02-08 17:37
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Errata: Fifteenth Episode by rokkitnite
I haven't a clue what this is about but I love it. A whole new world is created in moments - and the language that goes with it is gorgeous. Read it and weep:
http://www.abctales.com/story/rokkitnite/errata-fifteenth-episode---ente...
Thank you for flagging this Tony. I've fixed the few typographical weirdities created by the site changeover. I'm glad you found it fun on a sentence-by-sentence basis - that was what I was aiming for. In the context of the story, the Chief, Nessa, Two Blade and Drake Two have all appeared in previous chapters, so hopefully the reader would be starting to feel somewhat accustomed to their surreal environment. I'm keen not to waste anybody's time, and keep things entertaining, but I'd like it to make sense and be rewarding as a proper, traditional narrative too.
Thanks again for your encouragement!
*On edit*
Umm... like a numpty I've managed to screw up the links. Here's the new correct link: http://www.abctales.com/story/rokkitnite/errata-fifteenth-episode-enter-...
And as it is Story of the Week you have mucked up the link from the Front Page - however it is fixed now!
Thanks Tony. Sorry!