I remember II by poetjude
Wed, 2006-08-30 12:08
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I remember II by poetjude
Not a poem! This little love-lorn piece is just so corruscatingly honest that it deserves to be read. So much is not laid down, so much is between the lines. It almost made me cry:
thesnowman36
This is a great piece! If you've ever been torn between something and then realized what you've lost or what you wrought upon someone else, then you can definetly identify with this. Great job!
poetjude
This is an old piece I moved at the weekend as I was tidying hence it went back into the editorial cycle. I apologise for the careless errors and its angsty-ness but I was probably a bit blotto on G+Ts at the time and the quinnine in the tonic water makes me maudlin (well that was always my excuse!)
But if I start writing things like this again, please torture me all night with bad love poetry then shoot me at dawn.
jude
"Cacoethes scribendi"
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