Nineteen First Lines
By Brooklands
Thu, 04 Oct 2007
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We were waiting for news,
there are dumpsters simply brimming.
It is too nice a day to be living in England.
I am in Art Burger,
sat along rotating pine benches.
I know what my friends think,
my big sister rings to say she is riding around.
I wanted to take a picture of these four workmen;
Suzie found tusks as long as her finger,
a length of lead piping.
I’m imagining that this is your trailer.
I made a grown woman cry last night;
Ma’am, I am imagining you.
A clutch of swifts pass overhead.
It’s like a mosh pit, says the girl with the blue-striped tights.
Here is what made me think of death:
their teeth were scrabble tiles.
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I'm not sure this works, but
I'm not sure this works, but I'm all for a bit of experimentation.
I might pinch this idea and see what I get.
Cheers,
Mark
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Joe I think if you
Joe I think if you re-arrange the lines a bit, it could be friggin aceo
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