Stories and Chapters

By MrJustabout

Stories which stand on their own and others which started out in one form and are on the move towards being chapters in novels.

Problem is to know when a story is one or the other.

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Next Time

By MrJustabout on Sat, 17 Jan 2009

Next time I’m taking the luggage to
Miscellaneous
Story
Certificate 15

Bright Lights / Dark shadows PT 2 of Bright Lights Posted 14th Dec

By MrJustabout on Fri, 19 Dec 2008

At first she had been happy to be swept along in the wake of his presence, intense, charming, amusing, mysterious and he wanted her. FEEDBACK PLEASE - OR WHAT'S THE POINT ?
Other Fiction
Story
Certificate 15

Bright Lights. #1 PT2- Dark Shadows Posted 19th Dec

By MrJustabout on Sun, 14 Dec 2008

“Paint your history with enough colour to make it real but mostly paint it grey” Well Isabella had begun to scratch away at the grey bland veil.
Other Fiction
Story
Certificate 15

Mr Justabout - Version 1 - 3700 words

By MrJustabout on Tue, 16 Dec 2008

Critiqued in WF October #85. Version Two and three followed but Version 4 posted. If these stories are to long for this format - feedback please.
Children's
Story
Certificate U

Mr Justabout - Version 4 - 1263 words

By MrJustabout on Tue, 16 Dec 2008

Version 1 Critqued in WF #85 Oct as to long & to descrptive / wordy. Version 1 posted earlier
Children's
Story
Certificate U

Just A Game: Short Story 223 words

By MrJustabout on Wed, 24 Dec 2008

Nobody jogged anymore, nobody went outside any more. You stayed in your tower.
Other Fiction
Certificate U

Life gets in the way

By MrJustabout on Tue, 20 Jan 2009

I often sit Quietly. Thinking. Contemplating. Gaining Perspective. Looking Back. “Not now dear, your driving !”
Miscellaneous
Story
Certificate U

Inspirational

By MrJustabout on Tue, 10 Mar 2009

Ever heard of David Eddings
Crime
Certificate 12