Jake Junior

By Silver Spun Sand

Thu, 23 Jan 2014
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I never ever saw you – never looked
with wonder on your face; felt
your fingers tightly curl around mine,
nor rocked you to sleep with prayers
that God would keep you safe...
no matter what, no matter when.
 
I like to think, though, that I met you
in that peerless moment, on the road
leads from this world to the next;
your joyous ‘hello’ – my sad farewell;
your tears, soft on my cheek, but know
this... that once, I breathed your name.
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Submitted by prettyrose on

yes brilliant and a topic close to my heart. Really expressed it beautiful.

 

well done

 

take care

smiley Keep Smiling

Keep Writing xxx

Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on

Obliged to you, Prettyrosesmiley

Tina

 

Submitted by Bee on

Beautiful. 

Bee

Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on

Thank you, Beesmiley

Tina

 

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

I appreciate the way you give him personhood. Rhiannon

 

Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on

Thank you, Rhiannon, indeed.

Tina