twinkle, twinkle
By alang
Sat, 14 Mar 2009
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wanton night
dark, delicious desires!
curvaceous stars
lascivious twinkle
a moonlit wanderers ever present companion
blackest space
ever watching
silently waiting to devour humanities curiosity
lead us into temptation
slobber us with evil
the mind is a dangerous place
potholes and bumps litter the path to righteousness
erect penile projectiles entice our deepest sins
glorious pubis, red, red labia of the heavens!
and we watch, set in perpetual motion,
our needs fulfilled by night time ejaculation
our fears suspended in one extended heartbeat
time stops
we cry. we moan.
delicate porcelain skin
now sweat soaked and torn with lines of passion
the innocent now our whore.
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Superb imagery. I think you
Superb imagery.
I think you could manipulate the form a little more to 'entice' the reader into the poem,
J x
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