You Bleed As You Stutter

By alang

Sun, 01 Mar 2009
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smiling inconsiderate me
dashes your dreams
with the click of a finger
in the blink of a lie
kiss your good time good bye
sweet dear those words
still make you bleed
as you stutter them out
forced from your stomach to
apease my male ego.

i love you too.

Certificate PG
Poem
Words That Flow Like Oil Over Water
Love

Comments

Submitted by jennifer on
This is superb wordplay on a familiar phrase: 'in the blink of a lie' love it! J x

 

Submitted by alang on
Hi Jennifer, Thank you very much!! This was just a little doodle that started life as just the first two lines and then fell into place. Thanks for reading. Alan