dead skin
By alphadog1
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Its just dead skin not fairies
That glisten gold on a drawn sun.
It reflects and refracts the light
Buoyantly
From pulled in cold curtains
In soft bellows that quake the air
They spiral
Into the illusionary shape of angels wings
Upon this wooden wax floor.
Its dead skin not ghosts
That step upon the boards
To pull in these lines of protolight
That cut through fat flesh like a hotknife
To the brain.
Its dead skin and its no skin at all
That leaves its mark upon my aching heart
As I hear you get up
And slowly walk out of the door.
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Disappointed coz I thought it
Disappointed coz I thought it was fairies and such, but the poem is lovely. Sharply, simply worded and clever in the way you use what it's not to describe the beauty of scene, and the ultimate point of her leaving.
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Ooh I know what you mean.
Ooh I know what you mean.
this is a lovely poem though, I can see the dust catching the light and floating and spiralling. You captured the despondent sadness at the end really well too.
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