Orbital

By alphadog1

Sun, 01 Feb 2015
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5 comments
 

 

Soft gentle slow orbits
caress  the bud elliptical
Opening up the warmth
Of  tender expectation

The bud begins to tighten
As the bloom begins spread
Its warming flesh petals
With each considered caress

With slight, the Butterfly kisses rise
The long tongue penetrates deep
To claim his just reward
The secret nectar
so delicious and so  sweet

 

© ADH2015

 

Certificate 15
Poem
Erotica

Comments

Submitted by Philip Sidney on

So sensual.

Submitted by alphadog1 on

I am glad that you liked it. 

 

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

Aesthetically pleasing to read.

Jenny.

 

Submitted by alphadog1 on

I have redrafted  it from this bare bones into a second draft.  Which  I am happier with as the poems  meaning  is hidden a little  better, its  complete  which is also an issue. No poem should be complete, but it also has (in the second position)  more divergance. 

 

Submitted by alphadog1 on

I have redrafted  it from this bare bones into a second draft.  Which  I am happier with as the poems  meaning  is hidden a little  better, its  complete  which is also an issue. No poem should be complete, but it also has (in the second position)  more divergance.