whistle on the Wynd
By alphadog1
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Cars shunted, and changed lanes. The radio in the background allowed a trickle of Mozart to be heard. It was hot the sun shone down from a clear sky, the motorway was packed.
‘Are we there yet’
‘No not yet.’
‘Ouch!’
‘Eleanor leave your sister alone!’
'DAAAD!'
Josh looked turned towards Lyn and smiled as he could see that she was trying to concentrate. Giving her elfin features a cute, but harassed side smile. The kids were making a noise, that was nothing unusual. However, the traffic was heavy and that always made her nervous. On days like this he wish he could drive. But years of epileptic seizures had closed a door to that.
‘Kids keep the noise down.’
Giggles,
laughter.
‘Come on now girls, mummy is trying to drive.’
Kids keep the noise down.
They stopped the car at the old priory. The decision was to stop here for a picnic before heading down to Plymouth for the weekend. The break also meant that Lyn could have a break with the drive, which had been arduous and difficult.
It was a warm sultry early afternoon, The sky had thick rolling dark clumpy cloud, that threatened rain. The overgrown grass blew wildly about the wooden fences and the foreground of the abbey; whose dark corners and broken arches made of grey stone and tumbledown buildings, of rich red rock appeared, at least to a part of him pulse with an aged and undead malevolence, giving the scene a restless romantic and haunted look. He walked about taking the scene in with his Canon Dsi; and as he clicked paused and set the frame, Josh felt the malevolence grow. A strange stabbing at his neck as if unseen eyes, full of a loathing of living things stared out. Despite the clinging sticky warmth of the day, a chill within him rose.
‘Look Dad’
It was A.J, the youngest of the three, her green eyes shone with the delight of pushing boundaries, as she scaled the wall. She had her mother’s beauty and his love of excitement
‘AJ get down!’
Giggle.
‘come and get me!
Giggle
‘Come on girls, its food time.’ called Lyn.
Two girls came scuttling out of the shadows of the abbey. as one clambered down the the rough greystone wall.
Eleanor came over exitedly.
‘Look what I’ve found.Dad.’
Two tiny hands covered with wet mud red clay and sand were open palms revealed a long narrow tube.
‘What’s that?’
‘It looks like a whistle.’
'Give it to me!’
‘Girls please!’
Lyn rummaged in her handbag for the wet wipes. Always there for the emergencies.
‘You can’t eat with hands like that. ‘
The muddy tube was discarded in the grass. Josh put down the camera on corner of the blanket and then walked towards where the muddy tube had been discarded. He picked it up. His curiosity allowed a tingle within him to grow.
The tube was about five inches long. It glinted with an azure stain in the rich near burgundy slimy red clay. Abstractly, Josh picked up the plastic packet of wet wipes already near depleation due to three mucky little girls and their ferocious appetite for adventure, and began to remove the clay.
‘Josh put it dow-‘ sigh
‘-but it’s actually quite’ –
‘-Daaaad, it’s probably got dog poo on it-‘
‘-Errgehh! Daddy picking up!’
‘Eleanor touched it ffirst !’
Oh god kids!
The tube cleaned up well. It was about five inches in diameter, made of bronze, or brass, he couldn’t tell, but then he wasn’t a metallurgist. He was an unemployed father of three, with unrecognised disability and a degree that, if he had the ambition, which right now, he had little of, could become something.
‘The writing’s familiar-’
‘-Darling, just put it down.’ She had that awkward face he recognised, he glanced at her, smiled, slightly and looked down again. Trying his hardest not to hear the tiredness in her voice. Knowing the growing distance was growing even more of late.
‘-It’s got some Anglo Saxon runes on it.’
The soft sweet smelling wipes removed the wet clay in a smear across the tube.
through the mud tiny indentations could be seen. There were runes and they were Anglo Saxon. He was certain of it. He recalled During the Dane law, that began around 638 CE many practices were exchanged, the writing of runes was one of them. The Anglo Saxon Runic alphabet, differed from the Viking in many respects. Some of this was due to accent and dialect differences between locations; making the runic system exchangeable to a point. The letters stood out C..al e..n..de h..ae w…ill c…y..me. …Cal ende hae will cyme… call and he will come…. But come has more than one definition, the recognition of a price being one. A reckoning. Fascinating.
There were also three tiny holes near the bottom of the tube. Taking his pen knife from his pocket he began to slowly remove the soil. Mud fell out of the end of the tube. Then with a little difficulty he removed the rest of the earth clearing it completely.
‘Darling, please put that thing down. ‘
‘It’s a, a whistle I think.’
‘Or some old tat some other tourist dropped while climbing the walls here. Darling, every time you dig something up, Eleanor copies you. ‘
‘She has a love of historical finds.’
Lyn gave her stare to Josh. The stare that Josh new too well. The stare that said don’t be an arse and be realistic.
‘Have you seen any jobs lately?’
‘-Nothing.’
‘-Your not looking hard enough. Seven years you have been working towards that bloody degree, now you have it, start making some money.’
Josh looked down and away from the kids. Lyn had said that in front of them deliberately. It was to undermine what little self worth he had.
‘Why don’t you look for work.’
‘-We’ve been there Josh. For Christs sake don’t be an arse.’
‘What’s an arse Daddy.’
Josh walked away. He found Eleanor at his side a moment later.
‘I love you daddy.’
‘I love you too p-.’ He was going to say pumpkin, but changed his mind, as she was high on the spectrum disorder for either Asperger’s or SSD. Ergo she would not understand a metaphor. He grinned and looked at this their eldest daughter with love.
‘Tell me, where did you find it?’
Eleanor smiled and led Josh to the western wall.
‘Just down there Dad.’ She said quietly.
‘Dad, why is Mummy like that.’
Mummy is worried that there isn’t enough money to keep us in our home. Mummy hates daddy. It happens.
Josh’s eyes became strained. Hiding the anxiety that was building.
‘Its nothing to worry about darling.’
The words sounded empty and he knew that Eleanor was smart enough to pick up on it.
‘So where exactly did you find it?’
She pointed down at the base of the wall.
Both of them looked at the hole recently uncovered by the recent rain that had fallen. Feeling a little nervous, and not knowing why, Josh put his hand into the earth and felt something hard and narrow. He pulled at it. With a soft plop the earth released its secret.
it was the topper most part of a skeletal finger; it was recognisably human.
‘That settles it, put it back. Its some piece of history that belonged to that dead body. Leave it alone.Her words were even more shocking by the ferocity of the sound. He knew she was tired of making the decisions of being the one that had to come up with places to go, things to do. He heard it in her voice, especially after a couple of glasses of wine.
Jess the middle of the three girls and the most inquisitive looked at the whistle.
‘Mummy’s right. We should leave it here. ‘
‘I think we should take it to the museum in Exeter.’ Josh tried to persuade.
Lyn gave Josh a hard stare.
Here we go again. No dammit
‘I am taking this back home, I am going to clean it and when we get home I am going to take it to Exeter museum. That is that.
Lyn looked at Josh . Her now mirthless eyes glittered with contempt.
‘Fair enough.’ came her reply.
‘Can I see daddy? AJ asked; her curiosity matched her sense of adventure.
Josh passed her the little whistle.
Aj thought about it, playing with the little whistle. Then she put her mouth too one end and blew. The sound it made was ethereal . A whisper on the wind Josh thought absently. The sound was captivating and yet distant. Lyn stared at Aj and Josh with anger.
‘That’s so fucking you isn’t it. Christ you let them do anything. How do you know that this whistle doesn’t have some , some weird shit on it,-
‘-You can’t keep them bottled up forever.’
' -or something the germs are everywhere. ‘
‘-what the hell is wrong with you’
‘It was next to a fucking corpse!’
-Jesus Lyn!’
‘-Be a fucking parent Josh for Chist’s sake!’
‘-What the-‘
‘-I’m sick of being the grown up around here Josh! Sick of it!’
Silence settled around the picnic blanket, as Josh held back the tears.
The drive home from the weekend was silent from everyone. But that night the nightmares began. Josh heard the cry first and went into the communal bedroom. AJ was kneeling on her bed her hands over her eyes, screaming in loud wails. He walked into the room and tried to hold her, but she fought him off.
‘She’s still in the dream.’
Then she pulled her tiny hands away from her face with forceful movements as if someone or something was stopping her.
Then she stared towards him.
'Why did you let me touch it Dad.
Her voice was low dark and malevolent. Her eyes were black sockets.
Josh awoke screaming,
That morning, AJ came into bed with them.
‘I had a baad dream daddy.’
‘Darling what happened?’
‘ At the broken place there was something there a dark thing it chased me and I couldn’t get away.’Her voice came in sobs.
‘come on let’s get up.’
An hour later over a summery breakfast, Josh spoke to Lyn.
‘You’re right. I’m I’m going to the museum today to see if I can get my name on the work list.Lyn smiled warmly at him.
‘I can be a bitch sometimes. ‘
He could hear the sadness in her voice, the sincerity was not there. But he knew that would never come back. Trust had been broken.
Josh waited patiently for one of the museum staff to meet him. In his pocket he played with the tiny whistle. When he met with the staff, he decided to avoid the issue of work and show the find instead.
‘Fascinating, fascinating and and where did you find it?' asked the plump sweaty little man behind the desk. said in his plum accent.
‘Plympton, Plympton Priory’
‘ well your right about the markings, a fascinating find, and close to where a body was found you say. ‘ There was a long pause.
you do know the story about the Priory?
‘No.’
‘Well I am surprised, I thought that everyone knew.’
Josh held back his sense of derision, this man was flogging his qualification.
'The priory was once run by an abbot of questionable faith. His practices , well let’s say they were frowned upon. Its said that he …
Josh nodded in the right places, but on the whole found the man vacuous and full of his own words.
‘...incidenttally You were right about the runic alphabet. Its Anglo Saxon not Viking, the fact that it was found at the abbey infers that it might be part of an older treasure. Im not sure what the words themselves mean. “Cal ende hae wille cyme.” Sounds very, MR James. Of course the word Cyme also refers to claim so the owner is owned by the action of calling on Hae whomever , or whatever that might be. Can we have it?
‘ Ill think about it.’
Nods followed farewells.
That night both Josh and Lyn were about to go to bed themselves when screams filled with terror were heard coming from the girls bedroom.
Both Lyn and Josh ran up the stairs . They reached the door and tried to open it. But it was held fast.
‘open the door.’ Ordered Lyn
‘I can’t’ its not moving
‘Josh OPEN THE FUCKING DOOR!’
DADDY! Screamed AJ, Eleanor and Jessica
MUMMY! DADDY ! HELP ME! DADDY!
Josh slammed into the door. Once. Nothing happened. Twice. Again nothing. The third and the fourth time nothing. The screams were getting louder and louder. They could hear things smashing loudly around the room.
With a final viscous kick Josh smashed the door open and they fell into the room; just to see the duvets begin to wrap about the girls necks. the room howled and screamed with unseen violence, as he fought against the duvet’s that were forming into hideous faces.
He grabbed AJ and pushed her out of the room then Jess and Lyn helped remove Eleanor, whose face was pale.
They stumbled downstairs to the front room.
‘Is everyone okay?’
AJ looked stunned Jess was in tears
Lyn Looked up at Josh as Eleanor’s limp body lay in her arms.she was barely breathing.
The priory was in dark, But Josh knew walls themselves held an older secret and this secret would remain forever untold and as Josh put the whistle back here they had found it he hoped that what had been woken would now finally r
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This is great AD1 and I'm not
This is great AD1 and I'm not keen on the genre. It definitely needs a thorough edit but it's SO worth spending the time on.
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Edit in word
Andy, if it's just the odd typo that you're trying to correct revising in your edit facility here is ok but for more extensive reveiwing and alterations you're better off going into your original document and editing there. When you're happy with the changes paste the new version in your edit box here, delete the old one and then re-save. Much less hassle.
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