Murderous Mind
By angel-from-hell
Sun, 29 Nov 2009
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The eye of the tiger
As sharp as a knife
As clever as he was
He still lost his life
The man was strong
He was one of a kind
He got what he wanted
Because of his mind
No ones untouchable
Thats what i would teach
It can always be done
Their just out of reach
I took his life
Because of such hate
You can't bring them back
Its always too late
I regret what I've done
cos i am going through hell
Locked up all alone
In this disturbed jail cell
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Great dark feeling to this
Great dark feeling to this piece, well done. Made me check if all the windows and doors were locked lol.
In the third paragraph did you mean their in stead of there?
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great again youmg angel ,
Permalink Submitted by richielee70 on
great again youmg angel , should be 'no' on third verse not ' know ' ! haha excelent poem tho , keep 'em coming
roger higginbottom
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Great descriptive piece
Permalink Submitted by Lady-Bathsheba on
Great descriptive piece Angel Well Done :)
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