Before Maps Were Made
By Angusfolklore
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Before maps were made, no one strayed from straight lines
from the cradle to their graves. But everyone knew the old ways.
Winter rimed minds and the cartless track, peasant paths,
or ways pilgrims went breaking backs to reach sanctuary,
where untrue saints waited for prayer and their silver.
In spring, jealous boundaries restepped again by
important parish men, sheriff's foot pads,
cloaked crow men of the shire, desireless as priests,
ensuring the land of the shire was unstolen by any.
A motley crew, holy and otherwise, incense and solemnity
competing with mist in the outfield furrows.
Beyond their tread, wild boar watched sardonically,
these iron fisted lairds and lying scribes making
false landmarks as dogs scent trees.
Yet marshes sometimes swallowed petty men like these,
streams tooks turns to have murderous moods,
drowning lords and muck rakers arbritarily.
A flint eyed peasant, bolder than most, might have
watched for strays as the procession of tax leeches passed.
One less of such a retinue would not be missed.
A sullen sunken grave was surely unmarked
in those days before atlases.
The very grass was sharp as spears and contained
all manner of beasts unknown and unclassified,
things that did not go extinct because
they were were not acknowledged to exist.
Hills had more names than now, depending on how
murderous their mood, or how lofty their attitudes.
Forests waned and fluxed, a green tide unconcerned
with the ways of men, stone dykes or run rigs,
poor land seeded by stunted barley then.
Land hungry invaders who did not beware
might be engulfed themselves by gorse and heather,
if they did not at least sideways honour
the geography they tried to overwrite.
By day, boasting of conquest; by night a different tale,
cowering from what was worse than wolves out there.
Before maps were made by monks and warlords,
wild stags knew better the wayward paths,
bears patrolled the intersections of wild and tame,
and men bleated like sheep if they strayed too far.
Whole villages might be swallowed by haar
and never be missed by overlords too drunk
on power to know their wealth.
No planning permission then, when some random
shieling not worth a bead might endure from the neolithic
and other wattle and daub towns wiped out
by rat plague or the say so of the storm gods.
Saints would split mountains without a gasp
(no hard task), demolished hillforts at will,
and you were God's chosen lucky soul
if the gale blew your heart off course.
Before maps were made, God had a narrow horizon for all.
There was enough loss near at hand without worrying
about the foreign land of the next valley or town.
The circle of your unmapped eye was
the circumference of the world.
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'The circle of your unmapped
'The circle of your unmapped eye was the circumference of the world.' Brilliant ending line. Wanderers of centuries past ignorant of what existed beyond their town borders allowed imagination to become reality, creating monsters from a bear’s shadow in the woods and heard an omen in a wolf’s howl. How small the compass of that world; the expanded version unknown when foot paths were marked, and aerial paths still unseen. I enjoyed this poem very much- thanks for posting it.
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I really enjoyed this, too.
I really enjoyed this, too. The rhymes were brilliant, fun to read, but also like repeated sounds are familiar landmarks seen from different directions when you walk around a small area. Altogether wonderful
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Your poem transcended the
Your poem transcended the centuries and took me back to another place and time. Sensitive to social hierarchy of the times, you map the socio and religious intricasies so well. Really enjoyed this.
[Should that say "the geography they tried to overwrite..."]
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This wonderfully evocative
This wonderfully evocative poem drawn from another time and place is a joy to read. That's why it's today's Facebook and X/Twitter Pick of the Day.
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As every, you perfectly weave
As every, you perfectly weave landscape and past together, and bring both alive. Like Penny, I thought your last line was brilliant. Congratulations on the very well-deserved golden cherries.
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Congratulations! This is Poem of the Week!
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