As Tears Fall Down
By Art of the Diver
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Love
Dies
When one
Looks away
Refusing to see
How wrong one is, in not caring…
* Fibonacci by Rob Pearldiver *
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A good one Rob. Fibonacci
A good one Rob. Fibonacci poems are not as easy as they look. I experimented with this form in the ABC 2012 Poetry Pentathlon.
Regards, Luigi.
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Hi Rob,
Hi Rob,
I was really touched by your words, You really took me to the lighhouse and I found myself reading it as if that was a story on ABCtales, ofcourse its your story and a mix of emotions but so interesting to read, thank you for sharing.
And it's true, words are very powerful and can often take you to places you rather not have been part of, but beautiful and fun words can be too.
I love this poem.
Take Care
Trish
Keep Smiling
Keep Writing xxx
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