Divine

By rjg

Mon, 10 Jan 2022
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6 comments
 

I want nothing more

Than your lips against mine

When all stands still

As the stars realign

Pull me even closer

As our fingers entwine

I’d bottle your scent

And call it Divine

In this space

No existence of time

Immortal, we'd be

If love lengthened lives

Certificate 15
Poem
Young Writers
Romance
Love

Comments

Submitted by Turlough on

Isn't love wonderful?

And your poem captures that feeling so well.

I enjoyed this so I read it twice.

Good on you.

Turlough

Submitted by rjg on

Wow, thank you!! :) 

 

Submitted by donignacio on

I like your poem, I like the rhythm and the optimism. I think you write well, especially the last couple of lines leaves me with such a familiar, fuzzy feeling. I hope you stick around and keep uploading your work! -Michael

 

Submitted by rjg on

Thank you Michael! :)

 

Submitted by Maxine Jasmin-Green on

your Poem, keep up the good work. Can't wait to read what you write next. x

 

Submitted by Ric D on

...

Immortal, we'd be

If love lengthened lives...

 

I love that thought!!   

Love can change so much, but alas, not time.