Rewrite sonnet
By Basket case
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It was really nice meeting you here
Countless details light on my fire
I could hardly take away my heart from there
The past we’ve been through together bring up my desire
Three minutes and thirty seconds was perfect time for a song
Unnecessary to make the wonderful time to be long
Extra lines always not belong
It would be beautiful if nothing had been wrong
I don’t believe destiny when I was a child
Unpredictable life turned me into wild
Someday I would get used to the dirty world
But it would be cool if you keep your word
You are more complicated than a book
I wish, one day, I could take a look
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A sonnet can be tough to
A sonnet can be tough to write, well done.
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very lovely! part. liked
very lovely! part. liked 'Unnecessary to make the wonderful time to be long', how right. :-)
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