Three lines love poem

By Basket case

Tue, 31 Mar 2015

4 comments

1 likes

Used up the eraser,
still cannot wipe off your silhouette,
from my painting paper.

Permalink Submitted by hilary west on Tue, 2015-03-31 17:20

Very economical. I like the sentiment expressed in this poem!

Permalink Submitted by Basket case on Tue, 2015-03-31 18:28

yea, I like wrote poem in this way, sometimes, less is more.

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Permalink Submitted by forest_for_ever on Sun, 2015-04-05 05:06

What I like about this poem is how it started my imagination flowing. I think I could learn a lesson from the brevity of the piece. I am impressed.

Permalink Submitted by Basket case on Sun, 2015-04-05 07:40

Thanks for your comment :)

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