Silence

Cherry

By Beeme

Tue, 12 Jul 2011
  • 2185 reads
15 comments
 

So I scream
to you,
in silent bursts
of pain
you must never hear,
leave me
something
to remind
me of the beauty
we once
shared.

Certificate 12
Poem
Love

Comments

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on
A great little read Beeme. Jenny.

 

Submitted by Beeme on
Thank you very much Jenny and SundaysChild, yeah I see that you mean, I'll sort that out :) Beeme xx

k.

Submitted by Insertponceyfre... on
I really like this beeme - it's short but very powerful

 

Submitted by Beeme on
Thank you very much Insert!Thank you for the cherry abctales :) Beeme xx

k.

Submitted by L G Meadows on
A lot of emotion in those lines! Enjoyed.

 

Submitted by Beeme on
Thank you L G Meadows, glad you found this emotive :) Beeme xx

k.

Submitted by Cavalcader on
new Beeme Well deserved cherry! Good poem,short sad on love. Well expressed, and compact. Hope all is well. See another poem of Pinda's on here too. julie xx

Submitted by Beeme on
Thank you Julie, glad you enjoyed. Yeah so did I, it's so terribly sad. I really miss his encouragment and passion for writing as I'm sure you do. Good to hear from you :) Beeme xx

k.

Submitted by MistakenMagic on
A powerful little piece, Beeme! Well done on the cherry :) Magic xxx

 

Submitted by Beeme on
Thank you very much Magic :) beeme xx

k.

Submitted by Beeme on
posted twice :~)

k.

Submitted by RachelPatricia on
You've said so much in so few words, Beeme - this is beautifully brilliant :) Congrats on the cherries and hope you are well, Rachel xx

Submitted by awsamy on
Thank you so much Rachel, I am ok thanks :) Really glad you enjoyed this onw so much:) Beeme xx

Submitted by Nolan on
Beeme I am sure many of us can identify with looking in the mirror in the morning. Myself it's got to the stage I don't look at all. Just ignore him. It's a good poem &&
 

Submitted by cormacru999 on
My favorite poems are short ones that give just a burst of feeling (even though I've written long ones too). I really liked this one.

Nicholas Schoonbeck