See it, Say it, Sort it

By blighters rock
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Dirt riddled cages bustle the almost blind
through dirt encrusted tunnels
to stations where the dirt still can’t be seen.
Changing lines
walking through shiny tunnels
tannoys at every turn blurt out
See it, Say it, Sort it
as I mutter
Look to yourself
You dirty old git
but I know they’ll never clean up their act.
Then on another dirt riddled cage
I’m greeted by little black and red posters
warning about staring and touching
and as I lower my eyes once again
I see two young ladies gawp in disgust
at the dirt on my working jeans.
Victoria to Brixton is the most pitiful of rides
poor folk and hipsters low in the order of things
and as ancient iron screams the call of a maddened siren against ancient iron
through those dirt encrusted tunnels
I can actually taste the dirt!
And only when I climb those steps to the street
does the sun show the wind
shower its dirt and dust
back down the tube
back down the gullet
my journey away from the dirt
far from over and only at an end
when I’ve walked up the hill
and away from the buses
to sit with the rats and the foxes.
Leaders have gone underground too
men and women eating away at integrity
like termites under a hardwood window sill
the proof of their work only visible
when a knife is plunged at its joints
and the rot is removed from its core.
But what do you do to replace the rot
when for all the problems of the world
the termites blame the lice
and the lice blame the termites?
Putty takes too long to cure
and fools will be drawn to poke it
or even etch their own names into it
but if we got a good chippy in
he could ease out that rotten old sill
without smashing the window
then shape and fit a good old piece of oak
and announce with pride
See it, Say it, Sort it.
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A powerful piece Blighters,
A powerful piece Blighters, and very nicely done. Post more soon please!
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So very glad I don't need to
So very glad I don't need to go to London, reading this vivid poem. I am guessing the work stains on your clothes were from fixing a house? I liked how you moved through, the journey on the bleak, impersonal underground, to thinking about the country being a home, falling to bits and how to make it good. I bet Orwell would have enjoyed reading this, too
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