I still remember her name
By Brooklands
Mon, 16 Jun 2008
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I’ve lost all control of my jaw:
Karen, you are evolution’s coda.
I know I should say this more.
I’m just a floating fungal spore
drawn to your pitiless odour.
I’ve lost all control of my jaw.
Our dancing is like semaphore;
we share more than just this powder.
I know I should say this more.
Let me drink you with a curly straw,
let me flake you in to chowder:
I’ve lost all control of my jaw.
Let’s elope to Singapore,
my ornately carved pagoda.
I know I should say this more.
At least, let’s go to the dancefloor
with a Malibu and soda.
I’ve lost all control of my jaw:
I know I should say this more.
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I really enjoy the way this
I really enjoy the way this loops on itself; the repetition is almost hypnotic. Great work.
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